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Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 05:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
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05:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
At 06:00 UTC on the next day, the system further strengthened into a tropical storm, attaining the name Danny east-southeast of Charleston, South Carolina.awkward wording
anny then made landfall in Pritchards Island, north of Hilton Head, in a slightly weakened state at 23:20 UTC on the same day, with winds of 40 mph (64 km/h) and indicating that Danny weakened prior to moving inland.run-on sentence
and a tropical depression in 1979more specific
along with a high risk of rip currents from Sumter to Charleston beachesidea is disconnected from the rest of the sentence
that same day, a weather station at Folly Beach recorded a wind gust of 41 mph (66 kph) as Danny moved inlandwrong section
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Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 05:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
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05:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
At 06:00 UTC on the next day, the system further strengthened into a tropical storm, attaining the name Danny east-southeast of Charleston, South Carolina.awkward wording
anny then made landfall in Pritchards Island, north of Hilton Head, in a slightly weakened state at 23:20 UTC on the same day, with winds of 40 mph (64 km/h) and indicating that Danny weakened prior to moving inland.run-on sentence
and a tropical depression in 1979more specific
along with a high risk of rip currents from Sumter to Charleston beachesidea is disconnected from the rest of the sentence
that same day, a weather station at Folly Beach recorded a wind gust of 41 mph (66 kph) as Danny moved inlandwrong section
This will be all for now, kicking it back to you. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 04:02, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
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