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Hello there! Does anyone have a picture of the track of Hurricane Bertha? Thanks so much! CodingCyclone ( talk) 18:19, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
Someone submit the article for review. It looks good Destroyeraa ( talk) 19:40, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
There is only one source cited and it's a blog. No Reliable sources. I have searched and haven't found that number anywhere else. That number does not appear to be accurate. I think it should be removed or sourced better. 192.107.159.198 ( talk) 14:55, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
http://thoughtleadership.aonbenfield.com//Documents/20200810_analytics-if-september-global-recap.pdf
This says that bertha's damage was over $200 million, but the article says only about $130,000. Which one is it. Hurricanehuron33 ( talk) 23:33, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
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Hi Hink,
So you've reviewed Dolores and peer-reviewed Barry along with Noah. I've learned many things about reviewing from you and Noah, and I hope I will give an adequate review. This is only my second review whatsoever, so I ask Hurricane Noah to give a second review for anything I missed.
Done -
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Sources need a lot of work. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 00:33, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
@
Hurricanehink: Title case is "Hurricane Barry Kills One, Thirty Rescued from Rip Currents" instead of "Hurricane Barry kills one, thirty rescued from rip currents". I cannot pass unless title case is fixed. Also, Hurricanehink, about NCDC - the title needs to be as specific as possible. Titles such as "Tornado Event Report" or "Tropical Weather Outlook" are way too vague, and need to be specified. For example for NCDC: title=Event: Tornado in County, State [14:35 EDT-4]
and for TWO: Two-Day Graphical Tropical Weather Outlook: 8:00 EST July 5, 2020
. I cannot pass unless these are fixed too. ~ Destroyeraa
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I just want to over my $0.02. We mention too much about the SpaceX launch. There isn't even a mention of how short the storm was. I'd at least want to see that.(And I did not make the comments above the line. -- HurricaneTracker495 ( talk) 16:22, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
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Partly done. Was removed.
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Didn't say, so I removed it. I like hurricanes 01:50, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
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Lots of work needed too.~ Destroyeraa 🌀 23:45, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done per Hink.
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Done
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This section needs expansion. I know there was some kind of impact in Pennsylvania, Ohio, maybe Kentucky and New Jersey. Canada possible too. @ Hurricanehink and I like hurricanes: Try NCDC. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 16:53, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
Is there anything else Destroyeraa? ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 02:32, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
A good article is—
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(a) (prose) | There were some grammar issues, and those appear to be fixed. There were also some sentence structure issues, those appear to be resolved as well. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (MoS) | Passes the manual of style. ~' Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(a) (references) | There was a bunch of issues with references, though the nominator is an experienced editor and did not agree with most of the reviewer's tidbits. Title case was later added, and the reviewer is surprised that title case was not initially present. The reviewer hopes that the nominator will remember to do title case in the future. Regarding dates, the nominator believed that dates were unnecessary in the title, which the reviewer is fine with if dates are included in the date parameter. For NCDC, the titles were initially vague, but the nominator changed those. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (citations to reliable sources) | The references for the article all were to reliable sources. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(c) (original research) | There was no original research present. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | There were no copyright violations or plagiarism. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(a) (major aspects) | The article lacked some details initially about impacts elsewhere. However, Hurricanehink added some information. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (focused) | There was a tidbit about the SpaceX launch, though it was not deemed off-topic. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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There were not issues with neutrality. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) | All images are appropriate and are fair-use. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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After a long and extensive review, I believe that this article now meets the requirements of good article status, and I am thus passing this article at 14:25 UTC on November 18, 2020. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:26, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
Congratulations Hurricanehink and I like hurricanes! ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:31, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
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What is the source for the statement The NHC estimated that the system developed into Tropical Storm Bertha at 06:00 UTC that day while located about 140 mi (225 km) east of Savannah, Georgia? The TCR is cited, but the report only states that formation occurred by 06:00 UTC May 27, when the system was very near the Georgia and South Carolina coasts and separately, in a table, gives the coordinates as 31.5°N 78.8°W. Drdpw ( talk) 22:33, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
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Hello there! Does anyone have a picture of the track of Hurricane Bertha? Thanks so much! CodingCyclone ( talk) 18:19, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
Someone submit the article for review. It looks good Destroyeraa ( talk) 19:40, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
There is only one source cited and it's a blog. No Reliable sources. I have searched and haven't found that number anywhere else. That number does not appear to be accurate. I think it should be removed or sourced better. 192.107.159.198 ( talk) 14:55, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
http://thoughtleadership.aonbenfield.com//Documents/20200810_analytics-if-september-global-recap.pdf
This says that bertha's damage was over $200 million, but the article says only about $130,000. Which one is it. Hurricanehuron33 ( talk) 23:33, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Destroyeraa ( talk · contribs) 00:11, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Hi Hink,
So you've reviewed Dolores and peer-reviewed Barry along with Noah. I've learned many things about reviewing from you and Noah, and I hope I will give an adequate review. This is only my second review whatsoever, so I ask Hurricane Noah to give a second review for anything I missed.
Done -
I like
hurricanes
18:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done -
I like
hurricanes
18:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done -
I like
hurricanes
18:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done -
I like
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18:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done -
I like
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18:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Sources need a lot of work. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 00:33, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
@
Hurricanehink: Title case is "Hurricane Barry Kills One, Thirty Rescued from Rip Currents" instead of "Hurricane Barry kills one, thirty rescued from rip currents". I cannot pass unless title case is fixed. Also, Hurricanehink, about NCDC - the title needs to be as specific as possible. Titles such as "Tornado Event Report" or "Tropical Weather Outlook" are way too vague, and need to be specified. For example for NCDC: title=Event: Tornado in County, State [14:35 EDT-4]
and for TWO: Two-Day Graphical Tropical Weather Outlook: 8:00 EST July 5, 2020
. I cannot pass unless these are fixed too. ~ Destroyeraa
🌀
16:26, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
|date=
parameter. I will check when all is done. ~ Destroyeraa
🌀
17:00, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
hurricanes
19:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
hurricanes
19:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
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19:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
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19:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
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19:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Partly done. Not sure if what I put is better or not.
I like
hurricanes
19:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
I just want to over my $0.02. We mention too much about the SpaceX launch. There isn't even a mention of how short the storm was. I'd at least want to see that.(And I did not make the comments above the line. -- HurricaneTracker495 ( talk) 16:22, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
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hurricanes
01:50, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
Partly done. Was removed.
I like
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01:50, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
Didn't say, so I removed it. I like hurricanes 01:50, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
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Done
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01:50, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
Lots of work needed too.~ Destroyeraa 🌀 23:45, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Done per Hink.
I like
hurricanes
03:11, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
hurricanes
03:11, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
Done
I like
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16:57, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
This section needs expansion. I know there was some kind of impact in Pennsylvania, Ohio, maybe Kentucky and New Jersey. Canada possible too. @ Hurricanehink and I like hurricanes: Try NCDC. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 16:53, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
Is there anything else Destroyeraa? ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 02:32, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
A good article is—
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (prose) | There were some grammar issues, and those appear to be fixed. There were also some sentence structure issues, those appear to be resolved as well. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (MoS) | Passes the manual of style. ~' Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (references) | There was a bunch of issues with references, though the nominator is an experienced editor and did not agree with most of the reviewer's tidbits. Title case was later added, and the reviewer is surprised that title case was not initially present. The reviewer hopes that the nominator will remember to do title case in the future. Regarding dates, the nominator believed that dates were unnecessary in the title, which the reviewer is fine with if dates are included in the date parameter. For NCDC, the titles were initially vague, but the nominator changed those. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (citations to reliable sources) | The references for the article all were to reliable sources. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(c) (original research) | There was no original research present. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | There were no copyright violations or plagiarism. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (major aspects) | The article lacked some details initially about impacts elsewhere. However, Hurricanehink added some information. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (focused) | There was a tidbit about the SpaceX launch, though it was not deemed off-topic. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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Notes | Result |
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There were not issues with neutrality. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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No edit wars that I know of. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) | All images are appropriate and are fair-use. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
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(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) | Captions are suitable. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC) | [[File:|16px]] |
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After a long and extensive review, I believe that this article now meets the requirements of good article status, and I am thus passing this article at 14:25 UTC on November 18, 2020. ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:26, 18 November 2020 (UTC) |
Congratulations Hurricanehink and I like hurricanes! ~ Destroyeraa 🌀 17:31, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
References
What is the source for the statement The NHC estimated that the system developed into Tropical Storm Bertha at 06:00 UTC that day while located about 140 mi (225 km) east of Savannah, Georgia? The TCR is cited, but the report only states that formation occurred by 06:00 UTC May 27, when the system was very near the Georgia and South Carolina coasts and separately, in a table, gives the coordinates as 31.5°N 78.8°W. Drdpw ( talk) 22:33, 20 June 2021 (UTC)