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The birth date could be specified in the "Early life and education" section too, apart from the lead (at the start of the section). Subsequently, the citation could be moved from the lead too.
"She has an older and a younger sister." Could you find the names of the sisters and their occupations?
Unfortunately, I cannot find any more information about her family than what is already present in the article. Trenyce herself, while notable by Wikipedia's standards, does not receive enough in-depth coverage concerning her personal and family life so I cannot find any notable sources discussing this.
Aoba47 (
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00:10, 11 September 2017 (UTC)reply
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Adityavagarwal: Thank you for the review. I greatly appreciate that you took the time to look through this for me. I honestly anticipated that I had to wait a lot longer for someone to pick this up for review. While I would not identify myself as a fan of this particular artist, Trenyce always stood out to me in the early days of American Idol, and there is a little nostalgia there for me. It was cool to work on an article about a relatively overlooked subject. I look forward to hearing any further feedback from you on this. Have a wonderful day/night!
Aoba47 (
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00:10, 11 September 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your message. Unfortunately, I will not have the time to conduct a full review of the article. I am going to take a hiatus from reviewing and content creation and expansion for the time being; good luck with the nomination.
Aoba47 (
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04:39, 11 September 2017 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The birth date could be specified in the "Early life and education" section too, apart from the lead (at the start of the section). Subsequently, the citation could be moved from the lead too.
"She has an older and a younger sister." Could you find the names of the sisters and their occupations?
Unfortunately, I cannot find any more information about her family than what is already present in the article. Trenyce herself, while notable by Wikipedia's standards, does not receive enough in-depth coverage concerning her personal and family life so I cannot find any notable sources discussing this.
Aoba47 (
talk)
00:10, 11 September 2017 (UTC)reply
@
Adityavagarwal: Thank you for the review. I greatly appreciate that you took the time to look through this for me. I honestly anticipated that I had to wait a lot longer for someone to pick this up for review. While I would not identify myself as a fan of this particular artist, Trenyce always stood out to me in the early days of American Idol, and there is a little nostalgia there for me. It was cool to work on an article about a relatively overlooked subject. I look forward to hearing any further feedback from you on this. Have a wonderful day/night!
Aoba47 (
talk)
00:10, 11 September 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your message. Unfortunately, I will not have the time to conduct a full review of the article. I am going to take a hiatus from reviewing and content creation and expansion for the time being; good luck with the nomination.
Aoba47 (
talk)
04:39, 11 September 2017 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.