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Reviewer: Eric Corbett ( talk · contribs) 18:03, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. |
Lead
"The tower has featured in numerous artefacts of popular culture ...". Artefact can't be the right word here, as it means tool or ornament.
"... and is a recognisable local landmark."Aren't all landmarks recognisable, and local?
Location
"... leading from London Paddington station."I don't think you can lead from rather than to can you?
Design
"The 23rd and 24th floors contain maisonettes split over two floors."I think we should have told before this that the block consists of 31 floors. Are these really maisonettes anyway? I thought that maisonettes had their own individual entrances rather than sharing communal entrance doors and stairs? Aren't they instead duplexes?
"... deliberately put slight variations in the structure to each apartment would seem different."Clearly something wrong there.
Are you aware that the tower consists of two blocks, one of 7 and one of 31 storeys joined by the service tower? My addition was reverted for no apparent reason. 188.28.177.9 ( talk) 17:36, 24 January 2018 (UTC)
Planning
"The tower opened on 28 June 1972, at a cost of £2.4 million."The way that's written makes it look as it was the opening that cost £2.4 million, rather than the tower block itself.
"... he died in 1987 before his reputation could be restored."When was his reputation destroyed?
Revival
"In 1994 residents in the tower, along with all other council stock in Kensington & Chelsea, elected to self-manage the properties ..."Council stock is inanimate, obviously can't do anything.
Cultural references
"Trellick Tower is reported to have been the inspiration behind J. G. Ballard's 1975 dystopian novel High Rise and its 2016 film adaptation directed by Ben Wheatley ...Reported by whom?
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. |
Lead
"The tower has featured in numerous artefacts of popular culture ...". Artefact can't be the right word here, as it means tool or ornament.
"... and is a recognisable local landmark."Aren't all landmarks recognisable, and local?
Location
"... leading from London Paddington station."I don't think you can lead from rather than to can you?
Design
"The 23rd and 24th floors contain maisonettes split over two floors."I think we should have told before this that the block consists of 31 floors. Are these really maisonettes anyway? I thought that maisonettes had their own individual entrances rather than sharing communal entrance doors and stairs? Aren't they instead duplexes?
"... deliberately put slight variations in the structure to each apartment would seem different."Clearly something wrong there.
Are you aware that the tower consists of two blocks, one of 7 and one of 31 storeys joined by the service tower? My addition was reverted for no apparent reason. 188.28.177.9 ( talk) 17:36, 24 January 2018 (UTC)
Planning
"The tower opened on 28 June 1972, at a cost of £2.4 million."The way that's written makes it look as it was the opening that cost £2.4 million, rather than the tower block itself.
"... he died in 1987 before his reputation could be restored."When was his reputation destroyed?
Revival
"In 1994 residents in the tower, along with all other council stock in Kensington & Chelsea, elected to self-manage the properties ..."Council stock is inanimate, obviously can't do anything.
Cultural references
"Trellick Tower is reported to have been the inspiration behind J. G. Ballard's 1975 dystopian novel High Rise and its 2016 film adaptation directed by Ben Wheatley ...Reported by whom?