In the transfer speculation are we talking British or Egyptian Pounds. Needs to be specific. - Done
”even appearances for the club was”. Missing a pronoun here. - Done
’andyo even considered’. Andyo? - Done
’3– victory” - Done
”Trézéguet despite agreeing personal terms ”. Seems to be another missing word - Done
Id expand the international career section. Did he do anything notable at U20? He scored goals, mention those. And his World Cup participation could be described in more detail.
Thanks for the review, I've made a start and checked off most of these. I'll have a look at expanding the international section as soon as possible.
Kosack (
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04:42, 25 July 2018 (UTC)reply
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Courcelles: I've expanded his international career section in a few places, wasn't really able to add much to the World Cup as he didn't really do a lot quite franky. Let me know what you think.
Kosack (
talk)
09:46, 25 July 2018 (UTC)reply
In the transfer speculation are we talking British or Egyptian Pounds. Needs to be specific. - Done
”even appearances for the club was”. Missing a pronoun here. - Done
’andyo even considered’. Andyo? - Done
’3– victory” - Done
”Trézéguet despite agreeing personal terms ”. Seems to be another missing word - Done
Id expand the international career section. Did he do anything notable at U20? He scored goals, mention those. And his World Cup participation could be described in more detail.
Thanks for the review, I've made a start and checked off most of these. I'll have a look at expanding the international section as soon as possible.
Kosack (
talk)
04:42, 25 July 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Courcelles: I've expanded his international career section in a few places, wasn't really able to add much to the World Cup as he didn't really do a lot quite franky. Let me know what you think.
Kosack (
talk)
09:46, 25 July 2018 (UTC)reply