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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 01:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 01:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
Toyota last competed in sports car racing in 1999: needs to be something like "Prior to the development of the TS030 Hybrid, Toyota last competed..."
the first car undertook a three-day, private test session at Circuit Paul Ricard, where it was planned to run for 40,000 kilometres (25,000 mi).: not quite right; the source doesn't say it was going to run 40,000 km at Circuit Paul Ricard (which would be hard to achieve in three days!).
-- I've copyedited; the prose is workmanlike and good enough for GA. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 15:35, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 01:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 01:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
Toyota last competed in sports car racing in 1999: needs to be something like "Prior to the development of the TS030 Hybrid, Toyota last competed..."
the first car undertook a three-day, private test session at Circuit Paul Ricard, where it was planned to run for 40,000 kilometres (25,000 mi).: not quite right; the source doesn't say it was going to run 40,000 km at Circuit Paul Ricard (which would be hard to achieve in three days!).
-- I've copyedited; the prose is workmanlike and good enough for GA. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 15:35, 11 March 2018 (UTC)