A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
While images are not required for GA status, it would be nice if some free images could be found. Just a photo or two of the campus would benefit the article.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Unfortunately, this article still needs further development to bring it to GA class. Please see section below on ways to improve the article. I would recommend trying to find more third-party sources to help you find more information to work with. You are welcome to nominate the article again after the article has been developed a bit further. Thank you for your effort. --
Tea with toast(話)04:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Appreciate the feedback, I am using your considerations to further improve the article. I will resubmit the article for improvement once I feel I have incorporated all of your suggestions.
TylerDurden8823 (
talk)
06:20, 16 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Areas needing to be developed
Essential things to be developed
Here are things that need to be included in the article:
History section: Who had the aim to build this school? How is it connected to the schools in New York and Nevada? Why did they choose to put the school on Mare Island? Being that it was only developed in 1997, you may be able to search through local newspaper archives to find this type of information.
Campus description: How many buildings are there? How old are the buildings (especially relevant since this used to be a naval base --have they renovated the naval base buildings, or did they build new ones?) Is there on-campus housing? What is the library like?
Full citations for references is essential for good articles to make sure the information remains verifiable when weblinks get redirected. Also, this article seems to mostly be sourced by links to the school's website; it would be better to find some more independent third party sources.
Other items that would benefit the article
Description of student body: What is the student enrollment in each program? Where do the students come from? (are there international students, are they mostly from California or how many other states are represented? does the school attract more Jewish students?) What kind of student extra curricular activities are there?
Academics: The article mentions 3 Masters of Health Sciences, but then only names 2 -- what is the third one? For the medical students, where do they gain clinical education, since it appears to me that there is not a hospital on Mare Island? How many years of schooling are required for the degrees? Are there any part-time students, and if so, how many out of the total school enrollment?
Research: How many faculty are there? How many students who attend there do research? How is the research funded?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
While images are not required for GA status, it would be nice if some free images could be found. Just a photo or two of the campus would benefit the article.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Unfortunately, this article still needs further development to bring it to GA class. Please see section below on ways to improve the article. I would recommend trying to find more third-party sources to help you find more information to work with. You are welcome to nominate the article again after the article has been developed a bit further. Thank you for your effort. --
Tea with toast(話)04:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Appreciate the feedback, I am using your considerations to further improve the article. I will resubmit the article for improvement once I feel I have incorporated all of your suggestions.
TylerDurden8823 (
talk)
06:20, 16 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Areas needing to be developed
Essential things to be developed
Here are things that need to be included in the article:
History section: Who had the aim to build this school? How is it connected to the schools in New York and Nevada? Why did they choose to put the school on Mare Island? Being that it was only developed in 1997, you may be able to search through local newspaper archives to find this type of information.
Campus description: How many buildings are there? How old are the buildings (especially relevant since this used to be a naval base --have they renovated the naval base buildings, or did they build new ones?) Is there on-campus housing? What is the library like?
Full citations for references is essential for good articles to make sure the information remains verifiable when weblinks get redirected. Also, this article seems to mostly be sourced by links to the school's website; it would be better to find some more independent third party sources.
Other items that would benefit the article
Description of student body: What is the student enrollment in each program? Where do the students come from? (are there international students, are they mostly from California or how many other states are represented? does the school attract more Jewish students?) What kind of student extra curricular activities are there?
Academics: The article mentions 3 Masters of Health Sciences, but then only names 2 -- what is the third one? For the medical students, where do they gain clinical education, since it appears to me that there is not a hospital on Mare Island? How many years of schooling are required for the degrees? Are there any part-time students, and if so, how many out of the total school enrollment?
Research: How many faculty are there? How many students who attend there do research? How is the research funded?