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Regarding the {{ failed verification}} in this edit of mine [1] ...
The reference does not mention the existence of a stopping point, nor a platform. At most, it implies that there was no station in or near the town.
The editor's commentary about a "political play" in the reference text is WP:SYN or WP:POV, and does not belong there. Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:42, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
"you will find extensive community wars in Toodyay and Guildford ... if you bothered to look"– WP:PROVEIT. Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:50, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
I think that this paragraph:
In Jack Stanbridge's 70 years of rails & wire in Western Australia, book two, [1] in the two pages devoted to Old Toodyay Station the text to a photo of the station confuses some issues - "Copy of opening day of Rail to Newcastle in 1888" against a photo of the 1897 building.
does not belong in the article body text. If 70 years... were being used as a reference elsewhere in the article I would suggest that the paragraph be included as an explanatory Note (separate section from References), but given that it's not, I suggest that it ought simply be deleted. Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:59, 16 July 2015 (UTC)
References
Standbridges two volumes have many small errors, ...– This article is not about those books, so that statement about errors in the books is not appropriate for this article - except (as previously mentioned) as an explanatory note if the book is cited as a ref for something (other than its own errors!) (Examples of notes clarifying discrepancies in refs: Milligan Street, Perth#Notes, St Denis Church, Joondanna#Notes "a", Triple DES#References and notes "a". I considered adding a visible note instead of a hidden comment inside the "sic" in Yemmerrawanne#Name variations.)
Have turned it into a ref/note - the books and author are not an easy argument for a notable article at this point, there is not enough easily gathered collected wp:rs for his life story despite his connections with castledare, bassendean, and other railway issues JarrahTree 15:28, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
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Regarding the {{ failed verification}} in this edit of mine [1] ...
The reference does not mention the existence of a stopping point, nor a platform. At most, it implies that there was no station in or near the town.
The editor's commentary about a "political play" in the reference text is WP:SYN or WP:POV, and does not belong there. Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:42, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
"you will find extensive community wars in Toodyay and Guildford ... if you bothered to look"– WP:PROVEIT. Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:50, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
I think that this paragraph:
In Jack Stanbridge's 70 years of rails & wire in Western Australia, book two, [1] in the two pages devoted to Old Toodyay Station the text to a photo of the station confuses some issues - "Copy of opening day of Rail to Newcastle in 1888" against a photo of the 1897 building.
does not belong in the article body text. If 70 years... were being used as a reference elsewhere in the article I would suggest that the paragraph be included as an explanatory Note (separate section from References), but given that it's not, I suggest that it ought simply be deleted. Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:59, 16 July 2015 (UTC)
References
Standbridges two volumes have many small errors, ...– This article is not about those books, so that statement about errors in the books is not appropriate for this article - except (as previously mentioned) as an explanatory note if the book is cited as a ref for something (other than its own errors!) (Examples of notes clarifying discrepancies in refs: Milligan Street, Perth#Notes, St Denis Church, Joondanna#Notes "a", Triple DES#References and notes "a". I considered adding a visible note instead of a hidden comment inside the "sic" in Yemmerrawanne#Name variations.)
Have turned it into a ref/note - the books and author are not an easy argument for a notable article at this point, there is not enough easily gathered collected wp:rs for his life story despite his connections with castledare, bassendean, and other railway issues JarrahTree 15:28, 17 July 2015 (UTC)