"AA leagues convened to rendered their findings." to render
"Kinslow's behavior had become a problem for Mack and Pirates." Mack and the Pirates. I thought this was a blatant error at first, but Mack did in fact manage Pittsburgh for a little while. Learned something new.
"to 225-pound (102 kg) during" to 225 pounds. If the kg conversion template is messing that up then remove that.
Having St. Louis Browns linked in later career would be nice.
"In the 1900 United States Census, he living with father," he was living with his father, also the comma isn't needed after father.
Thank you for your thorough review, I made all of the changes above except the access dates. According to
WP:CITEHOW, access dates are only needed for website only sources. Since physical newspapers are unchangeable, there is no need for an access date. This point is re-iterated further down here
Wikipedia:Citing sources#Links and ID numbers. Thanks again !Neonblaktalk - 18:40, 10 November 2013 (UTC)reply
"AA leagues convened to rendered their findings." to render
"Kinslow's behavior had become a problem for Mack and Pirates." Mack and the Pirates. I thought this was a blatant error at first, but Mack did in fact manage Pittsburgh for a little while. Learned something new.
"to 225-pound (102 kg) during" to 225 pounds. If the kg conversion template is messing that up then remove that.
Having St. Louis Browns linked in later career would be nice.
"In the 1900 United States Census, he living with father," he was living with his father, also the comma isn't needed after father.
Thank you for your thorough review, I made all of the changes above except the access dates. According to
WP:CITEHOW, access dates are only needed for website only sources. Since physical newspapers are unchangeable, there is no need for an access date. This point is re-iterated further down here
Wikipedia:Citing sources#Links and ID numbers. Thanks again !Neonblaktalk - 18:40, 10 November 2013 (UTC)reply