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Reviewer: Bwoodcock ( talk · contribs) 08:42, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
If a headshot of Cole is available anywhere, it would be good to have it in the infobox.
The lede and short description are both accurate, clear and concise, if a little dry.
The writing of the body of the article is similarly clear, and conveys some of the drama of what must have been quite an exciting, if brief, life.
Overall, this is an excellent article, well-written and well-organized. It would be nice to see more images, but those cannot be conjured from thin air.
I cannot add anything of substance to the article, nor find anything of substance to criticize, so, an easy pass. Bill Woodcock ( talk) 08:42, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Bwoodcock ( talk · contribs) 08:42, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
If a headshot of Cole is available anywhere, it would be good to have it in the infobox.
The lede and short description are both accurate, clear and concise, if a little dry.
The writing of the body of the article is similarly clear, and conveys some of the drama of what must have been quite an exciting, if brief, life.
Overall, this is an excellent article, well-written and well-organized. It would be nice to see more images, but those cannot be conjured from thin air.
I cannot add anything of substance to the article, nor find anything of substance to criticize, so, an easy pass. Bill Woodcock ( talk) 08:42, 4 January 2022 (UTC)