" featuring vocals from Australian recording artist Sia " → " featuring vocals by Australian recording artist Sia "
" Production for the song was also handled by Guetta, Tuinfort and Afrojack "
" as part of the iTunes Store's countdown to the album's release " — Not necessary
" Musically, "Titanium" is a ballad which draws from the genres of pop, house and urban-dance. "
" The song features lyrics about inner strength. " — Is it really a feature? Features are extras, not the core topic of the song.
" Critical reception towards the song was generally positive, with critics noting " → " Critics were positive towards the song was generally positive and noted "
" It was also a top twenty hit " — Hyphen between top and twenty.
" Production for the song was also handled by Guetta, Tuinfort and Afrojack. "
" Guetta hand-picked her " — Informal.
" whose version of the song leaked online in July 2011 " — Link "leaked online" to
Internet leak.
" In October 2011, it was revealed that American pop singer Katy Perry was the first person to be offered the track but turned it down. " — Cut it down to " American pop singer Katy Perry was the first person to be offered the track but turned it down. " and move it so that the events are listen in chronological order.
" A writer for Samesame.com.au also agreed calling it the "best cut" on the album " — Comma after "agreed".
" "'Titanium' sees Guetta giving the Australian songstress some long overdue commercial appeal, while Sia's vocals bring a quirky twist to an otherwise fairly straight up, urban-dance record." " — Paraphrase some of that quote; it's too long.
" It has since peaked at number five and was certified platinum by the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA) " — Tense inconsistency.
" In Austria, "Titanium" debuted at number three on the Austrian Singles Chart,[30] and at number nine on the French Singles Chart " — The French Singles Chart isn't in Austria.
" "Titanium" was also a top twenty hit in Belgium "
" featuring vocals from Australian recording artist Sia " → " featuring vocals by Australian recording artist Sia "
" Production for the song was also handled by Guetta, Tuinfort and Afrojack "
" as part of the iTunes Store's countdown to the album's release " — Not necessary
" Musically, "Titanium" is a ballad which draws from the genres of pop, house and urban-dance. "
" The song features lyrics about inner strength. " — Is it really a feature? Features are extras, not the core topic of the song.
" Critical reception towards the song was generally positive, with critics noting " → " Critics were positive towards the song was generally positive and noted "
" It was also a top twenty hit " — Hyphen between top and twenty.
" Production for the song was also handled by Guetta, Tuinfort and Afrojack. "
" Guetta hand-picked her " — Informal.
" whose version of the song leaked online in July 2011 " — Link "leaked online" to
Internet leak.
" In October 2011, it was revealed that American pop singer Katy Perry was the first person to be offered the track but turned it down. " — Cut it down to " American pop singer Katy Perry was the first person to be offered the track but turned it down. " and move it so that the events are listen in chronological order.
" A writer for Samesame.com.au also agreed calling it the "best cut" on the album " — Comma after "agreed".
" "'Titanium' sees Guetta giving the Australian songstress some long overdue commercial appeal, while Sia's vocals bring a quirky twist to an otherwise fairly straight up, urban-dance record." " — Paraphrase some of that quote; it's too long.
" It has since peaked at number five and was certified platinum by the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA) " — Tense inconsistency.
" In Austria, "Titanium" debuted at number three on the Austrian Singles Chart,[30] and at number nine on the French Singles Chart " — The French Singles Chart isn't in Austria.
" "Titanium" was also a top twenty hit in Belgium "