OK, well I've reduced the image caption and removed the broken ref (it was actually in the 2010 World Cup section). I'm not sure about the lead, though - he's had a short, successful and uncontroversial career, it's hard to know what to write that's not being negative for the sake of it. Looking at other GAs for footballers and it doesn't look atypical.
ArtVandelay13 (
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12:24, 2 October 2010 (UTC)reply
Right, you shortened the caption down well and removed the broken ref. It's OK to disagree with me as I am new to the reviewing process. I suppose their isn't really anything negative about his career you can say really as he had a brilliant World Cup, Champos league and Bundesliga last season. I moved the reference to the end of the early career section as it covers the last setence too. OK, I am going to say pass. Well done!
Mr.Kennedy1talkguestbook13:27, 2 October 2010 (UTC)reply
OK, well I've reduced the image caption and removed the broken ref (it was actually in the 2010 World Cup section). I'm not sure about the lead, though - he's had a short, successful and uncontroversial career, it's hard to know what to write that's not being negative for the sake of it. Looking at other GAs for footballers and it doesn't look atypical.
ArtVandelay13 (
talk)
12:24, 2 October 2010 (UTC)reply
Right, you shortened the caption down well and removed the broken ref. It's OK to disagree with me as I am new to the reviewing process. I suppose their isn't really anything negative about his career you can say really as he had a brilliant World Cup, Champos league and Bundesliga last season. I moved the reference to the end of the early career section as it covers the last setence too. OK, I am going to say pass. Well done!
Mr.Kennedy1talkguestbook13:27, 2 October 2010 (UTC)reply