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I'll get to this shortly.--
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03:40, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
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GA review – see
WP:WIAGA for criteria
Is it reasonably well written ?
A. Prose quality:
Combine the two paragraphs of the first part of the Biography.
Fixed. —
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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Don't capitalize track.
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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Vehicle referring to an aircraft?
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This is awkward: Hudner attempted in vain to rescue Brown, before intentionally crash landing his vehicle to attempt to pull Brown from the burning wreck before running to Brown's side and attempting to wrestle him free from the wreck.
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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Change "In this time," to "During this time,".
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B.
MoS compliance for
lead ,
layout ,
words to watch ,
fiction , and
lists :
DMY dates.
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Ed!
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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Publisher for Alexander.
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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Standardize dates of retrieval between cites 4 and 7.
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Is it factually accurate and
verifiable ?
A.
References to sources :
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
C.
No original research :
Is it broad in its coverage ?
A. Major aspects:
What is first officer? Executive officer?
Linked. —
Ed!
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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What kind of ship was Helena?
Fixed. —
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Brown or Hudner flew 20 missions?
Both did, from what I understand. —
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19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
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B. Focused:
Is it
neutral ?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable ?
No
edit wars , etc:
Does it contain
images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales :
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions :
Overall :
Pass or Fail:
Made all of the fixes. Thanks again! —
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