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Reviewer: Hog Farm ( talk · contribs) 21:35, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
I'll take this review, I'll try to get started on it in the next couple days. Hog Farm ( talk) 21:35, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
Lead "He then briefly led to Manresa Institute on Staten Island" - What does this mean?
Education and early career - Simon Aichner is a redlink. Is this guy notable? If so, the redlink should be left to encourage article creation, but if he's not likely to pass GNG, the wikilinks should probably be removed.
Construction of a new campus - Same redlink thing with William F. Gannon As the president of a major university, I wouldn't be surprised if Gannon is notable. Any relation to Thomas Gannon?
Later years - "where he worked various jobs,[16] including serving as the graduate dean of sociology from 1914 to 1923" Is the second half of this sentence cited in source 16? If so, the citation should be at the end of the sentence. If not, citation needed.
External links - See Wikipedia:External links/Perennial websites#Find a Grave. It's strongly suggested that you only include this as an external link if it brings something especially unique to the page, which it doesn't seem to. I'd recommend removal unless a strong rationale can be made for keeping this link.
Images appear to be fine, and the sources look reliable. Checking for COPYVIO and then that's it for this review.
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Reviewer: Hog Farm ( talk · contribs) 21:35, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
I'll take this review, I'll try to get started on it in the next couple days. Hog Farm ( talk) 21:35, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
Lead "He then briefly led to Manresa Institute on Staten Island" - What does this mean?
Education and early career - Simon Aichner is a redlink. Is this guy notable? If so, the redlink should be left to encourage article creation, but if he's not likely to pass GNG, the wikilinks should probably be removed.
Construction of a new campus - Same redlink thing with William F. Gannon As the president of a major university, I wouldn't be surprised if Gannon is notable. Any relation to Thomas Gannon?
Later years - "where he worked various jobs,[16] including serving as the graduate dean of sociology from 1914 to 1923" Is the second half of this sentence cited in source 16? If so, the citation should be at the end of the sentence. If not, citation needed.
External links - See Wikipedia:External links/Perennial websites#Find a Grave. It's strongly suggested that you only include this as an external link if it brings something especially unique to the page, which it doesn't seem to. I'd recommend removal unless a strong rationale can be made for keeping this link.
Images appear to be fine, and the sources look reliable. Checking for COPYVIO and then that's it for this review.