![]() | Thomas Hancock (merchant) has been listed as one of the
History good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: March 8, 2022. ( Reviewed version). |
![]() | This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||
|
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Reviewer:
Kavyansh.Singh (
talk ·
contribs)
08:08, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
Nominator:
Dabberoni15 (
talk ·
contribs) at
20:39, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
---|
|
Overall: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
The son of an Anglican preacher, Hancock rose— Might be confusion as-to which Hancock we are referring to: John or Thomas
age of fourteen.— suggesting to write '14' in numerals, per MOS:SPELL09
on the Governor's Council— "in the Governor's Council"? (both in lead and the prose)
for fifty-five years— 55 in numerals
Hancock's mother was Elizabeth Clark, who died— suggesting: "Hancock's mother, Elizabeth Clark, died"
was fourteen years old,
seventeen sloops,
thirty-four years after— MOS:SPELL09
his own bookstore— linking bookstore appears over linking, pretty much everyday word.
"a general trade that soon involved the entire British empire."— the prose does not makes it clear where this quote comes from.
the West Indies, Spain and Portugal, building ships, and importing books and luxury goods from Europe— Oxford comma after 'Spain', and semi colon after 'Purtugal'
where they had 21,000 pounds combined— exactly or approximately?
|alt=
parameter. I have added short ALT text. You can expand if you wish. –
Kavyansh.Singh (
talk)
13:56, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
– Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 08:39, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
![]() | Thomas Hancock (merchant) has been listed as one of the
History good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: March 8, 2022. ( Reviewed version). |
![]() | This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||
|
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Reviewer:
Kavyansh.Singh (
talk ·
contribs)
08:08, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
Nominator:
Dabberoni15 (
talk ·
contribs) at
20:39, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
---|
|
Overall: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
The son of an Anglican preacher, Hancock rose— Might be confusion as-to which Hancock we are referring to: John or Thomas
age of fourteen.— suggesting to write '14' in numerals, per MOS:SPELL09
on the Governor's Council— "in the Governor's Council"? (both in lead and the prose)
for fifty-five years— 55 in numerals
Hancock's mother was Elizabeth Clark, who died— suggesting: "Hancock's mother, Elizabeth Clark, died"
was fourteen years old,
seventeen sloops,
thirty-four years after— MOS:SPELL09
his own bookstore— linking bookstore appears over linking, pretty much everyday word.
"a general trade that soon involved the entire British empire."— the prose does not makes it clear where this quote comes from.
the West Indies, Spain and Portugal, building ships, and importing books and luxury goods from Europe— Oxford comma after 'Spain', and semi colon after 'Purtugal'
where they had 21,000 pounds combined— exactly or approximately?
|alt=
parameter. I have added short ALT text. You can expand if you wish. –
Kavyansh.Singh (
talk)
13:56, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
– Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 08:39, 8 March 2022 (UTC)