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Reviewer: Calvin999 ( talk · contribs) 22:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
There are numerous issues in the other sections, poor phrasing and grammar (For example: A music video for "Think About It" was released, directed by Howard Greenhalgh, her official website described it saying it "provides the song with a varied canvas – bursts of vivid colour and imagery – that's if you can try and take your eyes off Melanie in a selection of stunning outfits!") Pictures have poor captions. One of the references has a double quotation mark in it, plus there are wrong/missing work and publisher parameters. Also cases of WP:OR in the article. A Credits and personnel section should also be added. Sorry, but I am failing as the article is under prepared with basic mistakes which should not be here. I think this article could become a GA, but it needs to be thoroughly copy edited. I suggest you list for a Peer Review or request a GOCE. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 01:16, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Calvin999 ( talk · contribs) 22:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
There are numerous issues in the other sections, poor phrasing and grammar (For example: A music video for "Think About It" was released, directed by Howard Greenhalgh, her official website described it saying it "provides the song with a varied canvas – bursts of vivid colour and imagery – that's if you can try and take your eyes off Melanie in a selection of stunning outfits!") Pictures have poor captions. One of the references has a double quotation mark in it, plus there are wrong/missing work and publisher parameters. Also cases of WP:OR in the article. A Credits and personnel section should also be added. Sorry, but I am failing as the article is under prepared with basic mistakes which should not be here. I think this article could become a GA, but it needs to be thoroughly copy edited. I suggest you list for a Peer Review or request a GOCE. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 01:16, 3 December 2011 (UTC)