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Reviewer: TBrandley ( talk · contribs) 01:55, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
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That's all. Good luck with your The X-Files (season 2) good topic! On hold. TBran dl ey 13:56, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
I think the article needs copy editing, as the prose is not clear and concise. Just as an example: in the lead's second paragraph consisting of three sentences, the word "season" is used five times. That's not "good" writing. MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:14, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
I'd be happy to pass if those are fixed. Good work! TBran dl ey 16:22, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
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There is more issues. Hope this is an okay review per WT:GAN!! TBran dl ey 14:58, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Comment I think this needs to be rewritten: "The season premiere, "Little Green Men" was originally supposed to have been written by series creator Chris Carter. Carter's original plan for the episode would have seen Mulder travelling to Moscow, Russia. In fact, he wanted to film the episode there, but was not able to secure arrangements. Chris Carter could not complete his opening extravaganza in time, where the X-Files were originally re-opened. So instead he and co-executive producers Glen Morgan, James Wong and Howard Gordon wrote four episodes to replace the planned premiere—with the X-Files closed, which gave Carter time to write "Duane Barry", the start of the first two-parter where the X-Files are re-opened." That has been in the article for as long as I've seen it, and needs copyediting. Also, is the Russia thing even mentioned in the source? I remember I asked Grapple if that was in any source he had, and he said no. Glimmer721 talk 18:00, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Still, still, more issues:
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Reviewer: TBrandley ( talk · contribs) 01:55, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
That's all. Good luck with your The X-Files (season 2) good topic! On hold. TBran dl ey 13:56, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
I think the article needs copy editing, as the prose is not clear and concise. Just as an example: in the lead's second paragraph consisting of three sentences, the word "season" is used five times. That's not "good" writing. MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:14, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
I'd be happy to pass if those are fixed. Good work! TBran dl ey 16:22, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Still more issues:
There is more issues. Hope this is an okay review per WT:GAN!! TBran dl ey 14:58, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Comment I think this needs to be rewritten: "The season premiere, "Little Green Men" was originally supposed to have been written by series creator Chris Carter. Carter's original plan for the episode would have seen Mulder travelling to Moscow, Russia. In fact, he wanted to film the episode there, but was not able to secure arrangements. Chris Carter could not complete his opening extravaganza in time, where the X-Files were originally re-opened. So instead he and co-executive producers Glen Morgan, James Wong and Howard Gordon wrote four episodes to replace the planned premiere—with the X-Files closed, which gave Carter time to write "Duane Barry", the start of the first two-parter where the X-Files are re-opened." That has been in the article for as long as I've seen it, and needs copyediting. Also, is the Russia thing even mentioned in the source? I remember I asked Grapple if that was in any source he had, and he said no. Glimmer721 talk 18:00, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Still, still, more issues: