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I just reworked the introductory paragraph; the sentences seemed too long and disjointed, connected by too many commas. It also seemed to repeat the independent nature of the band more than was necessary. For example, mentioning that they've sold X independent albums doesn't really need the qualifier "despite never signing to a major label" since they're... independent albums. :) Just my thoughts. — gRegor 18:51, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
I have updated the dates and made things correct. please leave them alone. our first cd was released in march of 1990. not in 1989. the artwork has a mis-print on it.
thank you, michael pritzl the violet burning
"Other projects these musicians have been involved in" seems quite the long section heading, and I'm not too keen on "Musicians collaborated with The Violet Burning" either. Not sure what to change them too, though. I'll be thinking about it. — gRegor 18:51, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
I think the current description of the Violets only hints at the religious aspects on their music and the article is lacking without discussing it directly.
Included in this discussion would be how the Violets influenced Vineyard praise and worship, the resulting split with Vineyard and the bands continued spiritual attributes.
Is it just me or does this page sound a little too much like propaganda for the band?
The active involvement of the artist to edit out material he disagrees with has left the resulting article bland and lacking.
The message here is too controlled.
Does anybody know if the name "The Violet Burning" has any deeper meaning? -- 92.207.18.111 ( talk) 18:04, 24 November 2009 (UTC) (langhaarschneider in the german wikipedia)
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I just reworked the introductory paragraph; the sentences seemed too long and disjointed, connected by too many commas. It also seemed to repeat the independent nature of the band more than was necessary. For example, mentioning that they've sold X independent albums doesn't really need the qualifier "despite never signing to a major label" since they're... independent albums. :) Just my thoughts. — gRegor 18:51, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
I have updated the dates and made things correct. please leave them alone. our first cd was released in march of 1990. not in 1989. the artwork has a mis-print on it.
thank you, michael pritzl the violet burning
"Other projects these musicians have been involved in" seems quite the long section heading, and I'm not too keen on "Musicians collaborated with The Violet Burning" either. Not sure what to change them too, though. I'll be thinking about it. — gRegor 18:51, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
I think the current description of the Violets only hints at the religious aspects on their music and the article is lacking without discussing it directly.
Included in this discussion would be how the Violets influenced Vineyard praise and worship, the resulting split with Vineyard and the bands continued spiritual attributes.
Is it just me or does this page sound a little too much like propaganda for the band?
The active involvement of the artist to edit out material he disagrees with has left the resulting article bland and lacking.
The message here is too controlled.
Does anybody know if the name "The Violet Burning" has any deeper meaning? -- 92.207.18.111 ( talk) 18:04, 24 November 2009 (UTC) (langhaarschneider in the german wikipedia)