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Reviewer: Sadads ( talk) 00:21, 30 August 2010 (UTC) A little about myself: I am an English and History undergrad, with all kinds of crazy interests. Though I have not done much with Children's literature, but I am active in WikiProject Novels, I hope to help in as many ways as possible. I do have a real life, and this review may take up to a week, I will make comments below in sections for you to respond to and a checklist of the GA nomination requirements, which I and only I will check off. I tend to do my reviews very thoroughly because I see GA as a stepping stone to FA, so this review will be a combination of a peer review and a GA review: I will examine every line and (likely) request many changes. If I am for some reason neglecting this review contact me on my talk page or if I am not reviewing this article properly, feel free to request a new reviewer, Sadads ( talk) 00:21, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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Saw that you are doing some major revamping work of the themes and style, it looks pretty good. I also saw the addition of the Characters section, I strongly suggest that you don't include that section. If the scholarship deals with the characters, I would suggest adding that information into the Plot section, theme section or into the individual character pages linked to from the plot. Characters sections are largely unnecessary, when the information makes more sense in the context of other sections, Sadads ( talk) 18:58, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sadads ( talk) 00:21, 30 August 2010 (UTC) A little about myself: I am an English and History undergrad, with all kinds of crazy interests. Though I have not done much with Children's literature, but I am active in WikiProject Novels, I hope to help in as many ways as possible. I do have a real life, and this review may take up to a week, I will make comments below in sections for you to respond to and a checklist of the GA nomination requirements, which I and only I will check off. I tend to do my reviews very thoroughly because I see GA as a stepping stone to FA, so this review will be a combination of a peer review and a GA review: I will examine every line and (likely) request many changes. If I am for some reason neglecting this review contact me on my talk page or if I am not reviewing this article properly, feel free to request a new reviewer, Sadads ( talk) 00:21, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
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19:32, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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19:32, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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19:34, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
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18:46, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Saw that you are doing some major revamping work of the themes and style, it looks pretty good. I also saw the addition of the Characters section, I strongly suggest that you don't include that section. If the scholarship deals with the characters, I would suggest adding that information into the Plot section, theme section or into the individual character pages linked to from the plot. Characters sections are largely unnecessary, when the information makes more sense in the context of other sections, Sadads ( talk) 18:58, 3 September 2010 (UTC)