I see this article is included as a "see also" in Mr. Arkadin but there's nothing explaining why. Not a major issue for this GAN but something ought to go into that article in the prose rather than just a context-less see also.
And actually, it links to a subsection of
The Frog and the Mouse which contains information about this story and its origins etc, which don't appear to be covered in this article.
"The fable also appears..." this and following two sentences are unreferenced.
"of The Scorpion and the Turtle. The Scorpion and the Turtle appears" repetitive.
"c. 1500" non-breaking space.
Consistency in italics and non-italics for the title of this. Interestingly I see that
The Frog and the Mouse is not italicised...
@
The Rambling Man: I fixed some flaws, didn't fix others for these reasons:
The lede summarizes all the most pertinent points of the article. There really isn't much else to say on this topic. It's not exactly a biography of Charlemagne. I am not going to inflate the lede with filler.
It's inadequate, it doesn't cover the major sections of the article. I'm not asking you for filler, nor am I suggesting it's a biography of Charlemagne, just that it's currently an insufficient summary of all the main points of the article.
The Rambling Man (
Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!)
10:34, 27 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I am uncomfortable with captionless images, but what should I put there? This is an illustration I made so I did not mention the source, as I would have done had I taken it off someone else's book.
I see this article is included as a "see also" in Mr. Arkadin but there's nothing explaining why. Not a major issue for this GAN but something ought to go into that article in the prose rather than just a context-less see also.
And actually, it links to a subsection of
The Frog and the Mouse which contains information about this story and its origins etc, which don't appear to be covered in this article.
"The fable also appears..." this and following two sentences are unreferenced.
"of The Scorpion and the Turtle. The Scorpion and the Turtle appears" repetitive.
"c. 1500" non-breaking space.
Consistency in italics and non-italics for the title of this. Interestingly I see that
The Frog and the Mouse is not italicised...
@
The Rambling Man: I fixed some flaws, didn't fix others for these reasons:
The lede summarizes all the most pertinent points of the article. There really isn't much else to say on this topic. It's not exactly a biography of Charlemagne. I am not going to inflate the lede with filler.
It's inadequate, it doesn't cover the major sections of the article. I'm not asking you for filler, nor am I suggesting it's a biography of Charlemagne, just that it's currently an insufficient summary of all the main points of the article.
The Rambling Man (
Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!)
10:34, 27 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I am uncomfortable with captionless images, but what should I put there? This is an illustration I made so I did not mention the source, as I would have done had I taken it off someone else's book.