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The article reads like it was written by the hotel's own marketing staff, with the following non-neutral or unsupported statements:
"one of the most internationally recognizable" (sourced to hotel's website)
"is the flagship property" (unsourced / hotels talk about their "properties" this way)
"widely regarded as one of the region's legendary properties." (unsourced)
"the finest hotel east of Suez." (unsourced)
"From the moment the hotel opened...the Peninsula name has been synonymous with welcoming the rich, the famous, the titled and the titans of industry to a place of unsurpassed luxury and service." (unsourced)
"shade of green known as "Peninsula green". (known by whom?)
"The Peninsula Hotel has a collection of highly acclaimed restaurants." (unsourced)
"one of the oldest fashion arcade in Hong Kong" (unsourced)
I took out some of the worst. Feel free to help.
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Thanks, I found a source for their notably large Rolls Royce fleet, so I promoted this fact to the opening (they've several times made Record-setting orders from Rolls Royce). Demoted the founding Kadoorie family to the History section
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The article reads like it was written by the hotel's own marketing staff, with the following non-neutral or unsupported statements:
"one of the most internationally recognizable" (sourced to hotel's website)
"is the flagship property" (unsourced / hotels talk about their "properties" this way)
"widely regarded as one of the region's legendary properties." (unsourced)
"the finest hotel east of Suez." (unsourced)
"From the moment the hotel opened...the Peninsula name has been synonymous with welcoming the rich, the famous, the titled and the titans of industry to a place of unsurpassed luxury and service." (unsourced)
"shade of green known as "Peninsula green". (known by whom?)
"The Peninsula Hotel has a collection of highly acclaimed restaurants." (unsourced)
"one of the oldest fashion arcade in Hong Kong" (unsourced)
I took out some of the worst. Feel free to help.
Kendall-K1 (
talk) 13:35, 24 January 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks, I found a source for their notably large Rolls Royce fleet, so I promoted this fact to the opening (they've several times made Record-setting orders from Rolls Royce). Demoted the founding Kadoorie family to the History section
KevinCuddeback (
talk) 00:23, 30 January 2012 (UTC)reply