...while elements of the canceled tour with West still included in some parts. → Put "were" between "West" and "still"
Done
From 2010 and onwards, the revamped shows had a New York theme... → Remove "and" from this phrase
Done
Each of them featured Gaga in new outfits, singing songs related to the concept of the segment, and was followed by a video interlude. → Replace "and was" with "as they were"
Done
Commentators commended Gaga's singing abilities, theatricality of the show, and sense of style and fashion. → Add "her" between "and" and "sense"
Done
Background
...West made a public statement that he would take temporary leave from his recording career due to the media and public reaction towards his outburst during Taylor Swift's acceptance speech... → There is no source listed saying that West "would take temporary leave" from touring because of this
Done
Gaga addressed the situation at Billboard's annual Women in Music luncheon, where she cited creative differences as the reason for the tour's cancellation. → No source to support this
Done
Development
The revamp of the tour were planned from the arena shows... → Change "were" to "was"
Done
Concert synopsis
...she wore bondage inspired black leather dress with guns... → Put "a" between "wore" and "bondage"
Done
Critical response
No issues
Commercial reception
Additional shows were announced, and Semi Precious Weapons will continue on the road with Gaga until the Monster Ball ends. → Change to past tense
Broadcast and recordings
The special has been nominated for five honors at the upcoming 63rd Primetime Emmy Awards:... → Update this information
Opening acts
No issues
Setlist
No issues
Tour dates
No issues
Personnel
No issues
References
References 3, 4, 7, 10-15, 21, 46, 52, 53, 67, 68 → The publisher for MTV is
Viacom as indicated at the bottom of the website
Done
References 7, 10, 11, 13, 15 → "MTV" should not be italicized
Done
Reference 27 → Both "BBC" and "BBC Online" need to be wiki-linked
Done
References 49 & 51 → "Billboard" should not be wiki-linked since it has already been mentioned in references
Done
Reference 64 → Publisher needed in citation
Done
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. There are many minor prose issues, as well as citation errors. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or explain why you believe particular items do not affect good article status until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me) 19:45, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply
I believe everything is good to go. :) —
DAP388 (
talk) 21:13, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident putting this article into good article status. Congratulations and keep up the good work that you are doing!
Rp0211(talk2me) 22:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply
...while elements of the canceled tour with West still included in some parts. → Put "were" between "West" and "still"
Done
From 2010 and onwards, the revamped shows had a New York theme... → Remove "and" from this phrase
Done
Each of them featured Gaga in new outfits, singing songs related to the concept of the segment, and was followed by a video interlude. → Replace "and was" with "as they were"
Done
Commentators commended Gaga's singing abilities, theatricality of the show, and sense of style and fashion. → Add "her" between "and" and "sense"
Done
Background
...West made a public statement that he would take temporary leave from his recording career due to the media and public reaction towards his outburst during Taylor Swift's acceptance speech... → There is no source listed saying that West "would take temporary leave" from touring because of this
Done
Gaga addressed the situation at Billboard's annual Women in Music luncheon, where she cited creative differences as the reason for the tour's cancellation. → No source to support this
Done
Development
The revamp of the tour were planned from the arena shows... → Change "were" to "was"
Done
Concert synopsis
...she wore bondage inspired black leather dress with guns... → Put "a" between "wore" and "bondage"
Done
Critical response
No issues
Commercial reception
Additional shows were announced, and Semi Precious Weapons will continue on the road with Gaga until the Monster Ball ends. → Change to past tense
Broadcast and recordings
The special has been nominated for five honors at the upcoming 63rd Primetime Emmy Awards:... → Update this information
Opening acts
No issues
Setlist
No issues
Tour dates
No issues
Personnel
No issues
References
References 3, 4, 7, 10-15, 21, 46, 52, 53, 67, 68 → The publisher for MTV is
Viacom as indicated at the bottom of the website
Done
References 7, 10, 11, 13, 15 → "MTV" should not be italicized
Done
Reference 27 → Both "BBC" and "BBC Online" need to be wiki-linked
Done
References 49 & 51 → "Billboard" should not be wiki-linked since it has already been mentioned in references
Done
Reference 64 → Publisher needed in citation
Done
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. There are many minor prose issues, as well as citation errors. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or explain why you believe particular items do not affect good article status until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me) 19:45, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply
I believe everything is good to go. :) —
DAP388 (
talk) 21:13, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident putting this article into good article status. Congratulations and keep up the good work that you are doing!
Rp0211(talk2me) 22:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply