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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Review

I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.

As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.

Lead
  • Good
Plot
  • Good
Reception
  • Good
References
  • Good

Verdict

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Hahc 21 04:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Review

I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.

As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.

Lead
  • Good
Plot
  • Good
Reception
  • Good
References
  • Good

Verdict

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Hahc 21 04:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC) reply


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