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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.
As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.
As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.
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