GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b. (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists): 1b. Comment: I would suggest to split the lead section into 3 paragraphs if possible. The two existing ones are a bit bulky. I also recommend to create an accolades section and separate it from critical reception. Explained and partly adjusted by nominator.
b. (citations to
reliable sources): 2b. Comment: There is only one unreliable source that should be replaced immediately: Gaming on Linux has been deemed as an unreliable source per
WP:VG/S. Most of the others are reliable, though some are unlisted (Gaming Boulevard, WellPlayed, Allgamers / HyperXGaming, Whattoplay, Indie Pearls, Bandcamp, SXSW). Were these sources checked for reliability? I would also support the awards (Apple, Webby) with secondary sources covering the show if possible. I would tend to exclude the Australian Game Awards, unless you can offer more input on notability (per
WP:VG/AWARDS). Explained and corrected by nominator.
@
Vestigium Leonis: I've replaced GamingOnLinux and removed the Australian Game Awards nomination. I added 3rd party refs for the Apple Design Award and Webby award. The unlisted sites are being used for interviews, e.g. I'm citing the developers' words, not the article writer's opinions or facts they mention, and The Voxel Agents linked out to them when it happened on Facebook/Twitter so they're real interviews. --PresN17:14, 15 March 2023 (UTC)reply
@
Vestigium Leonis: Ah, sorry: I don't want to split out an accolades section because it would only be one paragraph, so it makes more sense to leave it as a part of overall reception. I'd be fine with changing the lead to 3 paragraphs instead of 2, but I can't find a good way to split it that doesn't chop the gameplay summary in half or leave a tiny paragraph- it's actually only 7 sentences in the first and 6 in the second paragraph, so it's hard to rearrange. --PresN19:28, 15 March 2023 (UTC)reply
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b. (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists): 1b. Comment: I would suggest to split the lead section into 3 paragraphs if possible. The two existing ones are a bit bulky. I also recommend to create an accolades section and separate it from critical reception. Explained and partly adjusted by nominator.
b. (citations to
reliable sources): 2b. Comment: There is only one unreliable source that should be replaced immediately: Gaming on Linux has been deemed as an unreliable source per
WP:VG/S. Most of the others are reliable, though some are unlisted (Gaming Boulevard, WellPlayed, Allgamers / HyperXGaming, Whattoplay, Indie Pearls, Bandcamp, SXSW). Were these sources checked for reliability? I would also support the awards (Apple, Webby) with secondary sources covering the show if possible. I would tend to exclude the Australian Game Awards, unless you can offer more input on notability (per
WP:VG/AWARDS). Explained and corrected by nominator.
@
Vestigium Leonis: I've replaced GamingOnLinux and removed the Australian Game Awards nomination. I added 3rd party refs for the Apple Design Award and Webby award. The unlisted sites are being used for interviews, e.g. I'm citing the developers' words, not the article writer's opinions or facts they mention, and The Voxel Agents linked out to them when it happened on Facebook/Twitter so they're real interviews. --PresN17:14, 15 March 2023 (UTC)reply
@
Vestigium Leonis: Ah, sorry: I don't want to split out an accolades section because it would only be one paragraph, so it makes more sense to leave it as a part of overall reception. I'd be fine with changing the lead to 3 paragraphs instead of 2, but I can't find a good way to split it that doesn't chop the gameplay summary in half or leave a tiny paragraph- it's actually only 7 sentences in the first and 6 in the second paragraph, so it's hard to rearrange. --PresN19:28, 15 March 2023 (UTC)reply