So you're basicly splitting the sections in positive and negative, but how it's put, you say that fcs don't like the episode while that the tvc. Get different positive and negatives for each section
I have not found any sources other than the food critics that have given the episode negative reviews. I have, however, expanded the food critics section to include quotes from the critics that gave it positive reviews.
Theleftorium(talk) 13:02, 20 November 2011 (UTC)reply
That's better. I see more references too. ~~
Ebe123~~ →
report on my
contribs. 14:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)reply
"another" for the first sentence is unnecessary. In no other episode, it was never refered as a "fun Saturday". Also just a complementary adjective.
"another" is necessary because it is explained in the episode that they have spent several Saturdays together, and that explains why Marge feels upset.
Theleftorium(talk) 12:41, 20 November 2011 (UTC)reply
"On the way back, the car engine dies and they are forced to stop in the neighborhood of Little Ethiopia. Bart and Lisa get hungry so the three go into a restaurant serving
Ethiopian food." could this be more fluid?
So you're basicly splitting the sections in positive and negative, but how it's put, you say that fcs don't like the episode while that the tvc. Get different positive and negatives for each section
I have not found any sources other than the food critics that have given the episode negative reviews. I have, however, expanded the food critics section to include quotes from the critics that gave it positive reviews.
Theleftorium(talk) 13:02, 20 November 2011 (UTC)reply
That's better. I see more references too. ~~
Ebe123~~ →
report on my
contribs. 14:11, 20 November 2011 (UTC)reply
"another" for the first sentence is unnecessary. In no other episode, it was never refered as a "fun Saturday". Also just a complementary adjective.
"another" is necessary because it is explained in the episode that they have spent several Saturdays together, and that explains why Marge feels upset.
Theleftorium(talk) 12:41, 20 November 2011 (UTC)reply
"On the way back, the car engine dies and they are forced to stop in the neighborhood of Little Ethiopia. Bart and Lisa get hungry so the three go into a restaurant serving
Ethiopian food." could this be more fluid?