Reviewer:I Help, When I Can.[12]00:22, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Hello, lets do it. I haven't taken a deep look at the article yet, but I did not notice any maintenance templates, so I will get to work. Here are a couple of things I have noticed off the bat.reply
The "Background" section is not needed considering it has nothing to do with the album itself. Delete it.
Any material in the lead should be brought up in the actual article later. Therefore, there is no need to cite the lead. Cite the information when it appears later in the article.
Note #92 isn't a reference, therefore it isn't worth anything. Delete it (it will be deleted when you get rid of the singles chart). Include the two singles it mentions as actual singles unless you have a source saying otherwise.
Someone removed the note instead of me, but i can"t find the name of that one. however the source seen was:
"Piggy" and "Hurt" were released only as promotional singles, not as commercial singles.
"There are some connections glued between the two records; both are placed at numbers 200 and 336 respectively..." ← This statement makes no sense. It uses "respectively" when the albums were not mentioned in the sentence, nor in an identifiable order earlier in the paragraph.
As you read The Downward Spiral, you may notice something I added to the article, just to provide more information. It's not a fucking vandal bomb, it IS expansion stuff to meet your expectations. I have arrived late to respond to the review, by the way.
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10:21, 22 May 2011 (UTC)reply
First of all, I found your comments on my talk page rather rude. Honestly because of them, I was going to wait another month to get this done. But since I'm such a kind person, lets do this. Official Review Starts Below... I Help, When I Can.[12]14:55, 22 May 2011 (UTC)reply
A lot of information is cited on the release notes. I am doubtful that all of the information came from there. Please find more tangible sources to use on information.
Okay, I uploaded a 300x300 pixel version of the album cover image, but I can't do the goal of deleting a Closer music video screensot revision, so find somebody to kill off (delete) each of the revisions of those two pictures, the "Nin-the downward spiral800.jpg" and "Closer Monkey.jpg" ones (not their current revisions). Here's the photo I uploaded:
File:Nine Inch Nails The Downward Spiral 300x300 pixels.jpg I'll kick-start this picture for the
album template, while the 800 pixels version would be used in "Packaging" section.
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01:27, 23 May 2011 (UTC)reply
Have you ever heard of Wikipedia's
Non-free image policy? Baically, product covers, film, etc. Can only be used at restricted amounts. Not only can you not have two album covers, but you cannot have an album cover bigger than 300px. Also, fix the 300px image page to look like
this (notice the fair use rationale).
The caption on
File:Adrian Belew (2006).jpg (in the section "Songs") says "Adrian Belew is responsible for his guitar work on The Downward Spiral." Of course he is responsible for his own work. I get a feeling that this is worded wrong and that's what the problem is.
1007D, if you submitted this article as a Good Article Nomination, you can't review your own nomination. If
IHelpWhenICan (
talk·contribs) has truly abandoned this review, you should either re-submit it or see if you can get someone else to take up the review process. —
Torchiesttalkedits20:15, 2 June 2011 (UTC)reply
Reviewer:I Help, When I Can.[12]00:22, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Hello, lets do it. I haven't taken a deep look at the article yet, but I did not notice any maintenance templates, so I will get to work. Here are a couple of things I have noticed off the bat.reply
The "Background" section is not needed considering it has nothing to do with the album itself. Delete it.
Any material in the lead should be brought up in the actual article later. Therefore, there is no need to cite the lead. Cite the information when it appears later in the article.
Note #92 isn't a reference, therefore it isn't worth anything. Delete it (it will be deleted when you get rid of the singles chart). Include the two singles it mentions as actual singles unless you have a source saying otherwise.
Someone removed the note instead of me, but i can"t find the name of that one. however the source seen was:
"Piggy" and "Hurt" were released only as promotional singles, not as commercial singles.
"There are some connections glued between the two records; both are placed at numbers 200 and 336 respectively..." ← This statement makes no sense. It uses "respectively" when the albums were not mentioned in the sentence, nor in an identifiable order earlier in the paragraph.
As you read The Downward Spiral, you may notice something I added to the article, just to provide more information. It's not a fucking vandal bomb, it IS expansion stuff to meet your expectations. I have arrived late to respond to the review, by the way.
'| () () `'/ I> (
talk)
10:21, 22 May 2011 (UTC)reply
First of all, I found your comments on my talk page rather rude. Honestly because of them, I was going to wait another month to get this done. But since I'm such a kind person, lets do this. Official Review Starts Below... I Help, When I Can.[12]14:55, 22 May 2011 (UTC)reply
A lot of information is cited on the release notes. I am doubtful that all of the information came from there. Please find more tangible sources to use on information.
Okay, I uploaded a 300x300 pixel version of the album cover image, but I can't do the goal of deleting a Closer music video screensot revision, so find somebody to kill off (delete) each of the revisions of those two pictures, the "Nin-the downward spiral800.jpg" and "Closer Monkey.jpg" ones (not their current revisions). Here's the photo I uploaded:
File:Nine Inch Nails The Downward Spiral 300x300 pixels.jpg I'll kick-start this picture for the
album template, while the 800 pixels version would be used in "Packaging" section.
'| () () `'/ I> (
talk)
01:27, 23 May 2011 (UTC)reply
Have you ever heard of Wikipedia's
Non-free image policy? Baically, product covers, film, etc. Can only be used at restricted amounts. Not only can you not have two album covers, but you cannot have an album cover bigger than 300px. Also, fix the 300px image page to look like
this (notice the fair use rationale).
The caption on
File:Adrian Belew (2006).jpg (in the section "Songs") says "Adrian Belew is responsible for his guitar work on The Downward Spiral." Of course he is responsible for his own work. I get a feeling that this is worded wrong and that's what the problem is.
1007D, if you submitted this article as a Good Article Nomination, you can't review your own nomination. If
IHelpWhenICan (
talk·contribs) has truly abandoned this review, you should either re-submit it or see if you can get someone else to take up the review process. —
Torchiesttalkedits20:15, 2 June 2011 (UTC)reply