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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 04:43, 14 December 2010 (UTC)
Lead
- The lead should summarize the whole article. The first paragraph is not clear enough and is too short.
- Despite the positive reception, Jovovich has yet to release an official follow-up album – what is its significance here?
- Third paragraph is confusing.
- Similar case in fourth para too. Why do you include details of free downloads etc?
Background and production
- The photo is a copyright violation.
- A comma is needed after SBK Records
- pop star → pop singer. Also, the information about Australian Idol should be removed.
- Many sentences lack sources.
- Why are music videos mentioned here?
- Also, why second album details?
Music and lyrics
- ..."Taken from Milla's site" – poor. Remove that. And what is its signifance? Who said it?
- Her last name is Jovovich. So, use that and not Milla.
- Why a review in this section?
- Also needs sources
Release and promotion
- This section should go below the Album title and artwork section.
- Again, a clear copyright violation.
- Needs copy-editing and also sources.
Album title and artwork
- There are lots of unwanted information. Remove them.
- Source them too.
Reception
- Jovovich had to fight for her rights to have her own music released – source?
- Why some underscores?
- Again, sources needed. Add {{sic}} wherever needed.
Accolades
- Just the addition to Slant Magazine. Can be moved to reception section.
- Needs copy-editing.
Track listing
- Source
- Is the "Unreleased" section necessary?
- Also, formats?
- Credits should be a different section. Its too short. Also, source the credits.
Charts
- In her main page, there is a UK chart? Why is it not included? Also, it is US Heatseekers chart.
Release history
- Source needed
References and media
- Many references need {{cite web}} template.
- Two copyright violations.
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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 04:43, 14 December 2010 (UTC)
Lead
- The lead should summarize the whole article. The first paragraph is not clear enough and is too short.
- Despite the positive reception, Jovovich has yet to release an official follow-up album – what is its significance here?
- Third paragraph is confusing.
- Similar case in fourth para too. Why do you include details of free downloads etc?
Background and production
- The photo is a copyright violation.
- A comma is needed after SBK Records
- pop star → pop singer. Also, the information about Australian Idol should be removed.
- Many sentences lack sources.
- Why are music videos mentioned here?
- Also, why second album details?
Music and lyrics
- ..."Taken from Milla's site" – poor. Remove that. And what is its signifance? Who said it?
- Her last name is Jovovich. So, use that and not Milla.
- Why a review in this section?
- Also needs sources
Release and promotion
- This section should go below the Album title and artwork section.
- Again, a clear copyright violation.
- Needs copy-editing and also sources.
Album title and artwork
- There are lots of unwanted information. Remove them.
- Source them too.
Reception
- Jovovich had to fight for her rights to have her own music released – source?
- Why some underscores?
- Again, sources needed. Add {{sic}} wherever needed.
Accolades
- Just the addition to Slant Magazine. Can be moved to reception section.
- Needs copy-editing.
Track listing
- Source
- Is the "Unreleased" section necessary?
- Also, formats?
- Credits should be a different section. Its too short. Also, source the credits.
Charts
- In her main page, there is a UK chart? Why is it not included? Also, it is US Heatseekers chart.
Release history
- Source needed
References and media
- Many references need {{cite web}} template.
- Two copyright violations.