(1) Some minor quibbles in the lead: I would instead WL Catholic and delink Catholic Church, as the former redirects to the latter article anyway, and fix the curly quotation mark per
MOS:CURLY. (2) There is a liberal amount of the word "claim," which
WP:CLAIM states that we should avoid. (3) WL The Catholic Thing without piping, and I don't believe LifeSiteNews and ChurchMilitant.com should be italicized. (4) Fix grammar in "'Colonna' specific accuses", and "an rumor". (5)
WP:SCAREQUOTES in "humbleness"; I suggest amending this with the unquoted wikilinked word
humility.
(1) In FN 2,The Catholic Herald should be in the "work" parameter. (2) FN 3 links to The Spectator, not The Australian, and Australian should be in "work" para. (3) The article in FN 4 needs subscription and not even a snippet is present. I suggest adding an archived version of the piece. (4) "work" parameter for First Things in FN 5. (5) WL The Catholic Thing FN 7. (6) WL The Remnant FN 9. (7) "Publisher" parameter for Church Militant FN 10. (8) Needs citations per
WP:INTEGRITY in, "some holding interviews with the author." (9) Unsourced: "The Vatican has not made an official statement regarding the book."
I did a little copyediting in the article and I believe the prose looks clean now (to my untrained eye). I shall mark it as a pass, well done! As this is a newly-promoted GA, you may want to nominate it for
WP:DYK; more information can be found at that page.
Slightlymad04:28, 12 January 2018 (UTC)reply
(1) Some minor quibbles in the lead: I would instead WL Catholic and delink Catholic Church, as the former redirects to the latter article anyway, and fix the curly quotation mark per
MOS:CURLY. (2) There is a liberal amount of the word "claim," which
WP:CLAIM states that we should avoid. (3) WL The Catholic Thing without piping, and I don't believe LifeSiteNews and ChurchMilitant.com should be italicized. (4) Fix grammar in "'Colonna' specific accuses", and "an rumor". (5)
WP:SCAREQUOTES in "humbleness"; I suggest amending this with the unquoted wikilinked word
humility.
(1) In FN 2,The Catholic Herald should be in the "work" parameter. (2) FN 3 links to The Spectator, not The Australian, and Australian should be in "work" para. (3) The article in FN 4 needs subscription and not even a snippet is present. I suggest adding an archived version of the piece. (4) "work" parameter for First Things in FN 5. (5) WL The Catholic Thing FN 7. (6) WL The Remnant FN 9. (7) "Publisher" parameter for Church Militant FN 10. (8) Needs citations per
WP:INTEGRITY in, "some holding interviews with the author." (9) Unsourced: "The Vatican has not made an official statement regarding the book."
I did a little copyediting in the article and I believe the prose looks clean now (to my untrained eye). I shall mark it as a pass, well done! As this is a newly-promoted GA, you may want to nominate it for
WP:DYK; more information can be found at that page.
Slightlymad04:28, 12 January 2018 (UTC)reply