Written fairly well, with the exception of a few grammar issues that Ive corrected as I thought necessary.
Reads thoroughly and follows GA guidelines in terms of ref use and grammar.
Lead is expansive and informative.
Background
Written well, but needs some re-qording throughout the section.
Some sentences and claims such as "Received worldwide attention and exceeded expections" need refs.
Removed the sentence since there's no ref.
Xwomanizerx (
talk) 19:04, 16 August 2010 (UTC)reply
Development
Very expansive and broad in its coverage, also very informative.
This section was nicely sourced and written.
Concert synopsis
Reads well, however has some grammar issues are present.
Spears' talked, things like that should be re-worded for Spears spoke etc.
Critical and commercial reception
Nicely written and sourced, although could be longer and more detailed.
Autralian leg controversies
Very well written and balanced. Informative, with direct wuotes from management and staff. Good job.
Opening acts, Setlists and Tour dates
Sourced by Spear's official website. Nicely formatted and informative.
Additional notes etc.
Sourced, not too heavy and needed info.
Box office score
Sourced, and updated. Nicely formatted.
References
All references are formatted according to GA level requirements and are used well.
All in all
Besides for a few little problems, the article seems complete, well written and broad in is coverage. It seems well balanced and uses images when needed and wherever possible. Good aticle and nicely done!.
Thanks! I hope it's done now.
Xwomanizerx (
talk) 19:04, 16 August 2010 (UTC)reply
Written fairly well, with the exception of a few grammar issues that Ive corrected as I thought necessary.
Reads thoroughly and follows GA guidelines in terms of ref use and grammar.
Lead is expansive and informative.
Background
Written well, but needs some re-qording throughout the section.
Some sentences and claims such as "Received worldwide attention and exceeded expections" need refs.
Removed the sentence since there's no ref.
Xwomanizerx (
talk) 19:04, 16 August 2010 (UTC)reply
Development
Very expansive and broad in its coverage, also very informative.
This section was nicely sourced and written.
Concert synopsis
Reads well, however has some grammar issues are present.
Spears' talked, things like that should be re-worded for Spears spoke etc.
Critical and commercial reception
Nicely written and sourced, although could be longer and more detailed.
Autralian leg controversies
Very well written and balanced. Informative, with direct wuotes from management and staff. Good job.
Opening acts, Setlists and Tour dates
Sourced by Spear's official website. Nicely formatted and informative.
Additional notes etc.
Sourced, not too heavy and needed info.
Box office score
Sourced, and updated. Nicely formatted.
References
All references are formatted according to GA level requirements and are used well.
All in all
Besides for a few little problems, the article seems complete, well written and broad in is coverage. It seems well balanced and uses images when needed and wherever possible. Good aticle and nicely done!.
Thanks! I hope it's done now.
Xwomanizerx (
talk) 19:04, 16 August 2010 (UTC)reply