Thanks for taking a look! Regarding all the redlinks you removed, I understand the need to pare out links for non-notable topics, but if a person or publication is notable enough to someday have an article, it should be linked. If Clay Wade Bailey and Richard A. Boehne aren't notable enough for an article, they probably don't belong in the "Notable former employees" list in the first place. Meanwhile,
entire books and
journal articles have been written about the (Chicago) Day Book, so definitely deserves a link. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 10:16, 24 December 2014 (UTC)reply
OK, I wound up writing an article about the Day Book anyways. Carry on. :^) –
Minh Nguyễn💬 21:38, 24 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I apologize for the extreme delay. I am drafting the review, and was caught up with other things. Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 23:31, 24 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Here's the review.....
Infobox
Remove "The Kentucky Post" from the top- it's best for the infobox to match article title
Not done Especially in the later years, the newspaper's identity had shifted to The Kentucky Post in most of its coverage area. The Post is in somewhat of a unique situation due to their "bundling" strategy (described in the article). –
Minh Nguyễn💬 23:06, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
No need to have both
E. W. Scripps Company and "Scripps-Howard Newspapers" in "owner" field, just use one or the other
Done Clarified Scripps-Howard Newspapers as a division of the E. W. Scripps Company. The masthead identifies Scripps-Howard as the parent company, but the E. W. Scripps Company is what's notable enough for an article. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 23:06, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN2 Should be outside of the ) in "circulation" field per MOS:REFPUNC
"E. W. Scripps estimated daily circulation at 7,000 in the city and 6,000 in the countryside, before countryside distribution was discontinued" is unsourced
It would help to include what influenced the name changes
DoneThe Penny Post was intended to be more distinctive than The Penny Paper, which simply described an entire category of newspapers. Stevens reports that no reason was given for the change to The Evening Post; he speculates that keeping "penny" in the title would've been unsustainable given rising paper costs but notes that the price remained at one penny until 1918. Given that The Kentucky Post launched right after the change to The Cincinnati Post, I suppose the name change was intended to differentiate the two publications. Also, at some point (can't tell when), the Post began putting out Saturday editions in the morning rather than the evening. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 23:37, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
"E. W. Scripps and his half-brother George H."..... I'd either use "George H. Scripps" or simply "George" here
"The Post's frequent reports of collusion would at times decimate advertising revenue but, on the other hand, would prove immensely popular with readers, so that the paper always turned a profit"..... quite a lengthy sentence, and reads awkwardly
"the paper's editorial position was reliably conservative"..... what is "reliably" supposed to mean in this instance?
Done I changed it to "uniformly" and attributed the statement to the source, Stevens (1969). Does that help? –
Minh Nguyễn💬 04:45, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Give some specific names when mentioning "In the 1960s, the Kentucky Post dominated the newspaper market in 12 Kentucky counties"
See comments in "Crusader for reform" regarding "the paper's editorial position was reliably conservative"
"Combined Cincinnati Post and Kentucky Post circulation peaked at 275,000 in 1961, including nearly 60,000 for the Northern Kentucky paper"..... something about the first part seems incomplete, maybe The combined circulation for Cincinnati Post and Kentucky Post peaked, and then specify what statistics the figures 275,000 and 60,000 refer to.
"As the more viable paper"..... I question the POV of "viable" in this instance
Done I watered down the statement. "Viable" is the word the source uses. The context to this section and the one above is that the afternoon newspaper market as a whole had become unsustainable. After all, it was the Post that had secured a "failing operation" classification from the U.S. Attorney General. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 06:18, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
"which also offered Internet access subscriptions. Both papers' websites moved to Cincinnati.com in August 1998" needs to be cited
Done Renamed to simply "Contributors". But there is some danger in eliminating "Notable" from the section title: people lists tend to accumulate plainly non-notable people over time. That's why articles about schools and TV stations typically call this section "Notable alumni". "Alumni" sounds weird for a newspaper, but this newspaper is defunct so there's no need to emphasize the past tense. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:37, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
The image used isn't really needed
Not done Per
WP:PERTINENCE: "Effort should therefore be made to improve quality and choice of images or captions in articles rather than favoring their removal, especially on pages which have few visuals." This article could use a few more visuals, especially towards the end. This particular photo is relevant as it includes some of the Post's star contributors, which is the point of this section. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:37, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
All of the listed members are missing citations except for Clay Wade Bailey, Russel Crouse, William Greider, Michael Kelly, Earl Lawson, Alicia Reece, Eugene Walter, Gary Webb, and H. T. Webster.
Not done From
Template:Cite news/doc: "The publisher is the company that publishes the work being cited." Sulzberg is not a company. (On the other hand, the documentation does discourage including "New York Times Company".) –
Minh Nguyễn💬 04:57, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I'd argue that it is. CityBeat has been publishing weekly – on paper – for 20 years. Its articles have been cited by published sources such as
[1][2][3][4]. CityBeat isn't a blog, even though its website kind of looks like one. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:59, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN's 29, 33, 37, 40, and 43: Remove "via Google Books"- it is not the publisher of works
Not done "Via" comes from the |via= parameter in {{cite book}}; see
Template:Cite book#Publisher. It is intended to indicate the site or subscription database that hosts the work, not the publisher. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN's 46 and 60: Same as FN2
Not done Same as FN2. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN54: "City Wise" should read "Cincinnati" and not be linked
Not done It isn't technically part of the Enquirer, but rather a promotional page aimed at advertisers and produced outside of the paper's normal editorial process. I supplemented it with an actual story from the Enquirer. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 06:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN72: Same as FN's 29, 33, 37, 40, and 43
Not done Same as FNs 29, 33, 37, 40, and 43. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Further Reading
Since I'm not sure whether "Cincinnati CityBeat" is reliable, probably best to remove the link to it used here
Not done See above. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:19, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
"A History of The Cincinnati Post" has a HARVref error as there are no inline citations using it, so I'd remove this one altogether
Done|ref=harv removed. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:10, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
External links
"The Cincinnati Post" link has a connection error, and isn't really needed to begin with, so I'd remove it
Question: SNUGGUMS, which link is giving you a connection error? The tool reports two errors:
one loads just fine for me and
the other isn't even linked in the article. (The tool apparently doesn't know how {{Wayback}} works; the archived URL loads fine.) –
Minh Nguyễn💬 04:54, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I went ahead and removed it myself Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 14:30, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Overall
Well-written?: Could use a copyedit, and currently fails MOS
Verifiable?: Not up to par
Broad in coverage?: Almost
Neutral?: Needs POV cleaning
Stable?: All recent work has only been to construct the article
Pass or Fail?: I'm very sorry, but this is being failed as there are too many issues with the article right now to put it on hold. "Notable former employees" is particularly problematic. Better luck next time. Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 20:59, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
SNUGGUMS, thanks for such a thorough review. (It's my first GA nomination, so I appreciate the time you spent on it.) I'll address the various issues piecemeal and respond to individual points above. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 22:56, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
You're quite welcome, though this is going to take extensive work to meet GA standards. After addressing the above, I suggest putting this up for
WP:Peer review and get lots of input there before renominating. I will finish at that, and wish you luck in the future. Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 23:01, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Thanks for taking a look! Regarding all the redlinks you removed, I understand the need to pare out links for non-notable topics, but if a person or publication is notable enough to someday have an article, it should be linked. If Clay Wade Bailey and Richard A. Boehne aren't notable enough for an article, they probably don't belong in the "Notable former employees" list in the first place. Meanwhile,
entire books and
journal articles have been written about the (Chicago) Day Book, so definitely deserves a link. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 10:16, 24 December 2014 (UTC)reply
OK, I wound up writing an article about the Day Book anyways. Carry on. :^) –
Minh Nguyễn💬 21:38, 24 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I apologize for the extreme delay. I am drafting the review, and was caught up with other things. Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 23:31, 24 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Here's the review.....
Infobox
Remove "The Kentucky Post" from the top- it's best for the infobox to match article title
Not done Especially in the later years, the newspaper's identity had shifted to The Kentucky Post in most of its coverage area. The Post is in somewhat of a unique situation due to their "bundling" strategy (described in the article). –
Minh Nguyễn💬 23:06, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
No need to have both
E. W. Scripps Company and "Scripps-Howard Newspapers" in "owner" field, just use one or the other
Done Clarified Scripps-Howard Newspapers as a division of the E. W. Scripps Company. The masthead identifies Scripps-Howard as the parent company, but the E. W. Scripps Company is what's notable enough for an article. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 23:06, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN2 Should be outside of the ) in "circulation" field per MOS:REFPUNC
"E. W. Scripps estimated daily circulation at 7,000 in the city and 6,000 in the countryside, before countryside distribution was discontinued" is unsourced
It would help to include what influenced the name changes
DoneThe Penny Post was intended to be more distinctive than The Penny Paper, which simply described an entire category of newspapers. Stevens reports that no reason was given for the change to The Evening Post; he speculates that keeping "penny" in the title would've been unsustainable given rising paper costs but notes that the price remained at one penny until 1918. Given that The Kentucky Post launched right after the change to The Cincinnati Post, I suppose the name change was intended to differentiate the two publications. Also, at some point (can't tell when), the Post began putting out Saturday editions in the morning rather than the evening. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 23:37, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
"E. W. Scripps and his half-brother George H."..... I'd either use "George H. Scripps" or simply "George" here
"The Post's frequent reports of collusion would at times decimate advertising revenue but, on the other hand, would prove immensely popular with readers, so that the paper always turned a profit"..... quite a lengthy sentence, and reads awkwardly
"the paper's editorial position was reliably conservative"..... what is "reliably" supposed to mean in this instance?
Done I changed it to "uniformly" and attributed the statement to the source, Stevens (1969). Does that help? –
Minh Nguyễn💬 04:45, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Give some specific names when mentioning "In the 1960s, the Kentucky Post dominated the newspaper market in 12 Kentucky counties"
See comments in "Crusader for reform" regarding "the paper's editorial position was reliably conservative"
"Combined Cincinnati Post and Kentucky Post circulation peaked at 275,000 in 1961, including nearly 60,000 for the Northern Kentucky paper"..... something about the first part seems incomplete, maybe The combined circulation for Cincinnati Post and Kentucky Post peaked, and then specify what statistics the figures 275,000 and 60,000 refer to.
"As the more viable paper"..... I question the POV of "viable" in this instance
Done I watered down the statement. "Viable" is the word the source uses. The context to this section and the one above is that the afternoon newspaper market as a whole had become unsustainable. After all, it was the Post that had secured a "failing operation" classification from the U.S. Attorney General. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 06:18, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
"which also offered Internet access subscriptions. Both papers' websites moved to Cincinnati.com in August 1998" needs to be cited
Done Renamed to simply "Contributors". But there is some danger in eliminating "Notable" from the section title: people lists tend to accumulate plainly non-notable people over time. That's why articles about schools and TV stations typically call this section "Notable alumni". "Alumni" sounds weird for a newspaper, but this newspaper is defunct so there's no need to emphasize the past tense. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:37, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
The image used isn't really needed
Not done Per
WP:PERTINENCE: "Effort should therefore be made to improve quality and choice of images or captions in articles rather than favoring their removal, especially on pages which have few visuals." This article could use a few more visuals, especially towards the end. This particular photo is relevant as it includes some of the Post's star contributors, which is the point of this section. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:37, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
All of the listed members are missing citations except for Clay Wade Bailey, Russel Crouse, William Greider, Michael Kelly, Earl Lawson, Alicia Reece, Eugene Walter, Gary Webb, and H. T. Webster.
Not done From
Template:Cite news/doc: "The publisher is the company that publishes the work being cited." Sulzberg is not a company. (On the other hand, the documentation does discourage including "New York Times Company".) –
Minh Nguyễn💬 04:57, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I'd argue that it is. CityBeat has been publishing weekly – on paper – for 20 years. Its articles have been cited by published sources such as
[1][2][3][4]. CityBeat isn't a blog, even though its website kind of looks like one. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:59, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN's 29, 33, 37, 40, and 43: Remove "via Google Books"- it is not the publisher of works
Not done "Via" comes from the |via= parameter in {{cite book}}; see
Template:Cite book#Publisher. It is intended to indicate the site or subscription database that hosts the work, not the publisher. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN's 46 and 60: Same as FN2
Not done Same as FN2. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN54: "City Wise" should read "Cincinnati" and not be linked
Not done It isn't technically part of the Enquirer, but rather a promotional page aimed at advertisers and produced outside of the paper's normal editorial process. I supplemented it with an actual story from the Enquirer. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 06:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
FN72: Same as FN's 29, 33, 37, 40, and 43
Not done Same as FNs 29, 33, 37, 40, and 43. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 05:43, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Further Reading
Since I'm not sure whether "Cincinnati CityBeat" is reliable, probably best to remove the link to it used here
Not done See above. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:19, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
"A History of The Cincinnati Post" has a HARVref error as there are no inline citations using it, so I'd remove this one altogether
Done|ref=harv removed. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 09:10, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
External links
"The Cincinnati Post" link has a connection error, and isn't really needed to begin with, so I'd remove it
Question: SNUGGUMS, which link is giving you a connection error? The tool reports two errors:
one loads just fine for me and
the other isn't even linked in the article. (The tool apparently doesn't know how {{Wayback}} works; the archived URL loads fine.) –
Minh Nguyễn💬 04:54, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I went ahead and removed it myself Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 14:30, 29 December 2014 (UTC)reply
Overall
Well-written?: Could use a copyedit, and currently fails MOS
Verifiable?: Not up to par
Broad in coverage?: Almost
Neutral?: Needs POV cleaning
Stable?: All recent work has only been to construct the article
Pass or Fail?: I'm very sorry, but this is being failed as there are too many issues with the article right now to put it on hold. "Notable former employees" is particularly problematic. Better luck next time. Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 20:59, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
SNUGGUMS, thanks for such a thorough review. (It's my first GA nomination, so I appreciate the time you spent on it.) I'll address the various issues piecemeal and respond to individual points above. –
Minh Nguyễn💬 22:56, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply
You're quite welcome, though this is going to take extensive work to meet GA standards. After addressing the above, I suggest putting this up for
WP:Peer review and get lots of input there before renominating. I will finish at that, and wish you luck in the future. Snuggums (
talk /
edits) 23:01, 28 December 2014 (UTC)reply