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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:38, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
- I like the song, so I'm reviewing it :)-- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:39, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
Lead
- Most music critics positively received the song, and it debuted -> there has to be some kind of connector to these totally opposite things.
- Both are reception.
- after the release of My World 2.0. -> following the release
Background
- The mix was assisted by Christian Plata and Erik Madrid. Atweh and Luke Boyd perform background vocals on the song. -> try and tie this into one flowing sentence
Done
- Described as a "sobbing" ballad -> by who?
Reception
- RChris Richards -> typo?
- Done
- "That Should Be Me" also appeared on the UK Singles Chart at number 179 -> source? Also for Billboard source
- Done
Music video
- who is playing the keyboard. Bieber then sings his lines, playing guitar -> inconsistent
- How so? [Bieber] comes before who. What other wording would you suggest?
- The woman who directed the band into the studio now directs them and Bieber into another room with lights, to film the video. -> I'm pretty sure its Bieber's mother
- 1:09-1:15 is definitely not this woman. Candy o32 13:39, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Source queries
- 3 -> publisher?
- Publisher is listed. Not linked because it is the same link for the work.
- 6 -> publisher?
- Washington Post published by the Washington Post Company, and I've been told in FL procedures that in such cases only the work should be noted.
- 9 -> over-link
- Done
- What makes 10 and 12 reliable?
- No thread about their reliability, but I have used HitFix numerous times in my own GA's, and TVbytheNumbers/Zap2it is heavily used in television articles. Candy o32 13:44, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- 14 again over-link
- Can't unlink myself as it is the singlechart template. Candy o32 13:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Nice job, sorry again for the 3-week delay, had some extra issues on Wiki that prevented some immediate editing. You have 1 days to make these fixes....Lol, take you time ;)-- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 18:42, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Alrighty, this one is a pass. Good work.-- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:57, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:38, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
- I like the song, so I'm reviewing it :)-- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:39, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
Lead
- Most music critics positively received the song, and it debuted -> there has to be some kind of connector to these totally opposite things.
- Both are reception.
- after the release of My World 2.0. -> following the release
Background
- The mix was assisted by Christian Plata and Erik Madrid. Atweh and Luke Boyd perform background vocals on the song. -> try and tie this into one flowing sentence
- Done
- Described as a "sobbing" ballad -> by who?
Reception
- RChris Richards -> typo?
- Done
- "That Should Be Me" also appeared on the UK Singles Chart at number 179 -> source? Also for Billboard source
- Done
Music video
- who is playing the keyboard. Bieber then sings his lines, playing guitar -> inconsistent
- How so? [Bieber] comes before who. What other wording would you suggest?
- The woman who directed the band into the studio now directs them and Bieber into another room with lights, to film the video. -> I'm pretty sure its Bieber's mother
- 1:09-1:15 is definitely not this woman. Candy o32 13:39, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Source queries
- 3 -> publisher?
- Publisher is listed. Not linked because it is the same link for the work.
- 6 -> publisher?
- Washington Post published by the Washington Post Company, and I've been told in FL procedures that in such cases only the work should be noted.
- 9 -> over-link
- Done
- What makes 10 and 12 reliable?
- No thread about their reliability, but I have used HitFix numerous times in my own GA's, and TVbytheNumbers/Zap2it is heavily used in television articles. Candy o32 13:44, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- 14 again over-link
- Can't unlink myself as it is the singlechart template. Candy o32 13:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Nice job, sorry again for the 3-week delay, had some extra issues on Wiki that prevented some immediate editing. You have 1 days to make these fixes....Lol, take you time ;)-- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 18:42, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Alrighty, this one is a pass. Good work.-- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:57, 6 June 2011 (UTC)