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Reviewer: Larry Hockett ( talk · contribs) 00:47, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
This nomination has been in the queue for about 4+1⁄2 months, and that's too long. I'm happy to take up the review. Thanks to the nominator for the work that has gone into the entry. I'll post some initial feedback shortly. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 00:47, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
It's likely that I'll identify some points that aren't strictly necessary for promotion to GA status, so if you disagree with something, let me know your thoughts.
That's all for now. Once you address the above (most importantly, beefing up the lead and clarifying the timeline in the Crimes section), I'll make a pass through the article looking for unresolved issues. I may also just make some minor fixes for things like missing/extra hyphens and commas. Thanks for nominating this. Let me know if I can clarify any of my feedback. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 04:58, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
Thanks to the nominator for addressing the feedback here. I did a little copyediting, especially for the MOS:COMMA issue, and I added a bit about Lamotte having left her group home on furlough. The big issues (the thin lead section and disorganized timeline) have both been addressed by the nominator. It would be nice to have something more satisfying to say about Rasmussen's connection to Laureen Rahn, but I couldn't find an RS that explicitly stated whether he was an official suspect or not (the closest I came was patch.com, which doesn't strike me as an RS).
As for the other routine checks in the GA process, the image has an appropriate license description and caption, and the article is neutrally worded and stable. Earwig's Copyvio Detector returns nothing of concern, and random checks of references show that the article is faithful to the cited sources without close paraphrasing or other problems. There is no reason to hold up this entry's promotion to GA status.
Larry Hockett ( Talk) 14:28, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
It says Terry on his birth certificate according to his children, so I changed it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Telefonen ( talk • contribs) 12:00, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
![]() | Terry Peder Rasmussen has been listed as one of the
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please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: August 28, 2020. ( Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Larry Hockett ( talk · contribs) 00:47, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
This nomination has been in the queue for about 4+1⁄2 months, and that's too long. I'm happy to take up the review. Thanks to the nominator for the work that has gone into the entry. I'll post some initial feedback shortly. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 00:47, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
It's likely that I'll identify some points that aren't strictly necessary for promotion to GA status, so if you disagree with something, let me know your thoughts.
That's all for now. Once you address the above (most importantly, beefing up the lead and clarifying the timeline in the Crimes section), I'll make a pass through the article looking for unresolved issues. I may also just make some minor fixes for things like missing/extra hyphens and commas. Thanks for nominating this. Let me know if I can clarify any of my feedback. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 04:58, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
Thanks to the nominator for addressing the feedback here. I did a little copyediting, especially for the MOS:COMMA issue, and I added a bit about Lamotte having left her group home on furlough. The big issues (the thin lead section and disorganized timeline) have both been addressed by the nominator. It would be nice to have something more satisfying to say about Rasmussen's connection to Laureen Rahn, but I couldn't find an RS that explicitly stated whether he was an official suspect or not (the closest I came was patch.com, which doesn't strike me as an RS).
As for the other routine checks in the GA process, the image has an appropriate license description and caption, and the article is neutrally worded and stable. Earwig's Copyvio Detector returns nothing of concern, and random checks of references show that the article is faithful to the cited sources without close paraphrasing or other problems. There is no reason to hold up this entry's promotion to GA status.
Larry Hockett ( Talk) 14:28, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
It says Terry on his birth certificate according to his children, so I changed it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Telefonen ( talk • contribs) 12:00, 30 January 2022 (UTC)