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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 13:28, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:28, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
The work received a book review from Kevin H. Govern of the Ave Maria School of Law published in the Journal of Homeland Security and Emergency Management. If this is worth mentioning in the lead, tell us what the review says; and I see details are not given in the body either.
The author illustrates his points with charts: too vague to be useful; cut it or give more details.
explanations of combustible materials: do you mean descriptions? Or perhaps explanations of how they work?
a reference to existing terrorist networks: unclear; this is a list?
Europe (and the United Kingdom): well, yes, the UK is in Europe. What's the point of the parenthesis?
-- Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:50, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
The article is much improved. The official page is still dead for me, but it's not a requirement to fix that for GA. Thanks for fixing this; I'm promoting it to GA. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 21:49, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 13:28, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:28, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
The work received a book review from Kevin H. Govern of the Ave Maria School of Law published in the Journal of Homeland Security and Emergency Management. If this is worth mentioning in the lead, tell us what the review says; and I see details are not given in the body either.
The author illustrates his points with charts: too vague to be useful; cut it or give more details.
explanations of combustible materials: do you mean descriptions? Or perhaps explanations of how they work?
a reference to existing terrorist networks: unclear; this is a list?
Europe (and the United Kingdom): well, yes, the UK is in Europe. What's the point of the parenthesis?
-- Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:50, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
The article is much improved. The official page is still dead for me, but it's not a requirement to fix that for GA. Thanks for fixing this; I'm promoting it to GA. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 21:49, 23 February 2018 (UTC)