Teresa Perales was a Sports and recreation good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||
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January 21, 2013. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Teresa Perales (pictured) is the most decorated Spanish
paralympian in history? |
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This article is written in British English, which has its own spelling conventions (colour, travelled, centre, defence, artefact, analyse) and some terms that are used in it may be different or absent from other varieties of English. According to the relevant style guide, this should not be changed without broad consensus. |
Thanks Victuallers ( talk) 09:14, 22 January 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 20:01, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 20:01, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
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Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | The article has consistent issues with spelling and grammar. I've done substantial copyediting to try to fix these, but as a nonexpert in the field, I'm concerned errors are getting by me. | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Lead is somewhat over-detailed for a brief article. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | The first claim I checked in a spotcheck did not appear to be factually accurate (see above), which was a worrying start. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | The article gives an excellent and comprehensive look at Perales' career. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | The article contains some facts that don't appear to be of encyclopedic significance (see above). | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. | This article gives a good overview of the subject and shows impressive research. However, I'm concerned enough about the issues I found, particularly in the area of copyediting, that I'm not listing it at this time. My suggestion would be to give it a thorough doublecheck outside the GA process, both for grammatical and factual detail. The article could also use a bit of work for focus to move the reader more smoothly from event to event, and to cut some minor or extraneous detail. I hope you will renominate this one soon, though--Perales is an amazing athlete, and it's great to see her article coming along this well. Thanks for all your efforts, and your patience in waiting for a review! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 21:16, 22 April 2013 (UTC) |
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Teresa Perales was a Sports and recreation good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||
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A
fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
January 21, 2013. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Teresa Perales (pictured) is the most decorated Spanish
paralympian in history? |
This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
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This article is written in British English, which has its own spelling conventions (colour, travelled, centre, defence, artefact, analyse) and some terms that are used in it may be different or absent from other varieties of English. According to the relevant style guide, this should not be changed without broad consensus. |
Thanks Victuallers ( talk) 09:14, 22 January 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 20:01, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 20:01, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
Lead
Personal
Swimming
Awards and recognition
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
---|---|---|
1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | The article has consistent issues with spelling and grammar. I've done substantial copyediting to try to fix these, but as a nonexpert in the field, I'm concerned errors are getting by me. | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Lead is somewhat over-detailed for a brief article. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | The first claim I checked in a spotcheck did not appear to be factually accurate (see above), which was a worrying start. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | The article gives an excellent and comprehensive look at Perales' career. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | The article contains some facts that don't appear to be of encyclopedic significance (see above). | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. | This article gives a good overview of the subject and shows impressive research. However, I'm concerned enough about the issues I found, particularly in the area of copyediting, that I'm not listing it at this time. My suggestion would be to give it a thorough doublecheck outside the GA process, both for grammatical and factual detail. The article could also use a bit of work for focus to move the reader more smoothly from event to event, and to cut some minor or extraneous detail. I hope you will renominate this one soon, though--Perales is an amazing athlete, and it's great to see her article coming along this well. Thanks for all your efforts, and your patience in waiting for a review! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 21:16, 22 April 2013 (UTC) |
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