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Reviewer: Royroydeb ( talk · contribs) 06:54, 2 April 2015 (UTC) reply


  • " triangular cliff" - what triangular cliff? I mean the name or something like that.
The cliff does not seem to have a special name.
  • "castellum Gorneas" - if it was the name, then please make C capital.
The C in castellum is not capitalized in the original source (Khatchadourian 2008). In any case, I've removed castellum because it doesn't add any value, it's just Latin for castle.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 13:40, 5 April 2015 (UTC) reply

  • "Movses Khorenatsi" - who is he?
Clarified.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 15:46, 10 April 2015 (UTC) reply

  • "Mennieay" and "Amateay" - their sudden introduction seems strange.
They are mentioned in an inscription and their titles are provided within brackets.
How is "Most scholars" a weasel word"? Clichés and idioms section clearly says "...use a term such as all, most, or two-thirds."

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 04:10, 11 April 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Grigor Tananyan - was he a historian?
He's a philosopher [1], but he seems to have written extensively on history.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 05:39, 13 April 2015 (UTC) reply

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Royroydeb ( talk · contribs) 06:54, 2 April 2015 (UTC) reply


  • " triangular cliff" - what triangular cliff? I mean the name or something like that.
The cliff does not seem to have a special name.
  • "castellum Gorneas" - if it was the name, then please make C capital.
The C in castellum is not capitalized in the original source (Khatchadourian 2008). In any case, I've removed castellum because it doesn't add any value, it's just Latin for castle.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 13:40, 5 April 2015 (UTC) reply

  • "Movses Khorenatsi" - who is he?
Clarified.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 15:46, 10 April 2015 (UTC) reply

  • "Mennieay" and "Amateay" - their sudden introduction seems strange.
They are mentioned in an inscription and their titles are provided within brackets.
How is "Most scholars" a weasel word"? Clichés and idioms section clearly says "...use a term such as all, most, or two-thirds."

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 04:10, 11 April 2015 (UTC) reply

  • Grigor Tananyan - was he a historian?
He's a philosopher [1], but he seems to have written extensively on history.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি ( talk) 05:39, 13 April 2015 (UTC) reply


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