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This article appears to be an essay, entirely without references. DJ Clayworth ( talk) 17:03, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
technology came from time in new france it has been there for years and in history but personally idgaf
This is a copy, with variations, of Innovation, invention, and industrial research in Canada. DJ Clayworth ( talk) 21:25, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
He re-added all the content after I spilt into sub-articles! I'm open to suggestions! -- Allemandtando ( talk) 21:27, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
OK - I'm now entirely confused - Science and technology in Canada was the article I chunked off in the hope it would be more easy to manage and edit - but your redirect has erased one of the articles and now I'm totally confused about what goes where or what content is copied from where. We get paid for this right? there is just too much content for me to keep it straight in my head -- Allemandtando ( talk) 21:39, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
Hi
My name is Jeff Atkins, I am the author of the one original, now three, articles on Science and Technology in Canada. You are making a mess of articles that are perfectly coherent. If there are problems with references in the article on Diffusion of Technology in Canada then let’s add them. However to merge or redirect the articles on the Diffusion of Technology in Canada on one hand and Innovation, Invention and Industrial Research in Canada on the other hand constitutes most grievous vandalism. This is what happens when non-experts start to edit things they know nothing about.
Definitions
Diffusion of technology in Canada
The story of the spread of technology, in this case in Canada, no matter where it comes from, in the domains of transportation, communication, energy, materials, industry, public works, public services (health care), domestic/consumer life and defence.
Innovation, invention, and industrial research in Canada
The story of innovation, invention by Canadians only, in the fields of transportation, communication, energy, materials, industry, public works, public services (health care), domestic/consumer life and defence.
The spread of technology is one separate topic. The innovation and invention of technologies is another entirely separate subject. However there can be confusion with these two concepts.
Example
The steam locomotive was not invented in Canada, however it was introduced and used by many companies including the CPR. The article on the Diffusion of Technology in Canada therefore tells this story as well as hundreds of others relating to technologies that were not invented in Canada. It tells how they were introduced to Canada.
The BlackBerry on the other hand was invented in Canada. Therefore there are two stories to tell:
- One about its invention which is described in the article on Innovation, invention and industrial research in Canada. The invention and innovation article deals only with the story of Canadian innovation and invention - snowmobiles, BlackBerrys etc.
- And another about its introduction and use by the public and business, which is described in the article on the Diffusion of Technology in Canada.
The sections have similar divisions, Stone Age, Age of Sail etc. because people spread and invented similar technologies at the same time. However as pointed out above, diffusion on one hand and innovation and invention on the other are two different things and therefore need two separate articles even if the divisions in the articles are the same. The content of the two articles is almost totally different.
This can be seen in the length of the articles.
In terms of the number of technologies discussed, those in Diffusion of Technology in Canada far outnumber those in Innovation and invention in Canada because most of the technologies diffused in Canada came from other places and therefore the article is much longer than the one on invention and innovation.
Furthermore one of the benefits of the article on diffusion is to juxtapose technologies and in this way create insights into the type of life experienced by Canadians at given points in time as these technologies were introduced. Attempting to rely on what has been written on technology in the US in an effort to gain this appreciation is folly.
The article on innovation and invention is obviously intended to provide a summary of what was invented in Canada without having to search in many places to find the story.
Therefore please remove the redirect from the "edit this page" tab of the article on Innovation, Invention and Industrial Research in Canada. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.230.100.51 ( talk) 23:03, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
I hope this eliminates confusion.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.230.100.51 ( talk) 23:01, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
You are making a mess of articles that are perfectly coherent. actually by our standards they are not - leaving aside the current confusion caused by the redirect, there are a number of problems with the articles:
On a more general note, I *think* you have an account, please log into it when you edit because it helps to co-ordinate communication. -- Allemandtando ( talk) 23:20, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
Hello - Jeff Atkins Again
Dealing with the length is simple.
Break it into sections using the headers that are already there. Stone Age, Age of Sail etc.
I would do this but do not know how.
Include the references in each section and I can winnow out the ones that that do not belong.
Simple.
Of note. I have been editing the sections for style for several days. That is why you see all the changes in the history section.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.54.49.54 ( talk) 00:00, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Jeff Atkins - Hello Again
As stated earlier it is a mistake to consider that the article Innovation, Invention and Insustrial Research to be a duplicate of Diffusion of Technology in Canada. They are totally different in concept and almost totally different in content. Therefore please remove the redirect from the former to the latter and let the public see Innovation, Invention and Industrial Research in Canada.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.51.239.143 ( talk) 12:35, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Hello
I will start on the references. There is a learning curve because I do not know how to make references,(ie I think what you mean are footnotes), which is why there aren't any. However I will figure it out.
Jeff Atkins unsigned contribution by User:64.230.38.218
Hi Jeff
First please sign your userid when you write on a talk page. Please do this by putting four tildes like this ~~~~ at the end of what you write. Please do this even if you write your real name in the post.
Back to the answer: the citing of sources is described at Wikipedia:Citing sources. The short guide is that you do it like this: "Something was invented in Canada. <ref> All Canadian inventions. B & D MacKenzie. 2008 p24</ref>". Then in its own section called "References" you write {{reflist}} and all the references (footnotes) will be expanded. I hope that helps. DJ Clayworth ( talk) 15:37, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
I added the reference and wiki link for Jacques Ellul whom I have read but did not add a page number. I am fairly certain this is what is in that book as I have read it. I am just studying for job tests in the Canadian Government, so added a wiki link to Jean Talon too. May be I will add more references but it could be I have to read the article more for easy ones for me like the Jacques Ellul which I knew right off. I sometimes cover technology and innovation in my present government work. Pete ( talk) 07:53, 13 February 2014 (UTC)
The article is large enough to be moved to Wikibooks, since it's very long, but coherent in its content (after some of the glimpses). When I think of the diffusion of technology in Canada, the article should instead link to the current content in Wikibooks and then concentrate on recent (living) history and companies. This should avoid the hassle of how long the article is and loss of useful article content after someone eventually decides to downsize it. - Mardus ( talk) 03:46, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
tl;dr —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.135.88.44 ( talk) 21:10, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
Hello
I am the author. I have cleaned up the copy and the continuity and added footnotes. I think it is time to remove the tags. Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.230.37.226 ( talk) 21:12, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
Today, I have rated this article C class due to the article's apparent completeness. I would like to see more in-line referencing/citations before B class is achieved. Also, please ensure referencing follows Wikipedia:Manual of Style. PK T 15:41, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
Does that mean I can start copy-editing it now? Does this artical count as "stable" ?
I will put up the "{{GOCEinus}}" flag anyway and start.
Glubbdrubb (
talk) 13:19, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
A partial solution to the problems with this piece would be to create a template linking the different segments of this article, much as it is done in History of the petroleum industry in Canada. This is not difficult, Jeff; the easy solution would be to copy the oil industry template, rename it, modify as required and create appropriate links. Once the article is developed in this way,it would be easier for other Wikipedians to work on. Pmbcomm ( talk) 18:10, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
It's not like First Nations people were living in caves before the arrival of the sailing ships.....there's various technological innovations that are part of the Canadian identity/legacy which are decidedly FN in origin: the travois, tumpline, canoe (both the birch-bark and the big coastal cedar ones), post-and-frame/beam housing, quiggly holes and tipis, all kinds of unusual instruments of war/killing (particularly on the west coast), cooking technology (waterproof basket weavery, e.g. - which were fire resistant enough to be able to use for boiling, in fact...); not sure where to look for resources on this, just noting its relative absence. Also the introduction of certain mining techniques in the gold rush era in BC by Chinese is noteworthy, and the curious presence of smelted iron on the Northwest Coast by the time Cook/Vancouver et al were on the scene, ditto copper.... Skookum1 ( talk) 19:47, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
Carlaude, Boy did you make a mess of a fine article!
Jeff Atkins Chelsea Quebec Author —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.206.130.225 ( talk) 00:10, 16 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello Again
The article is about the history of technology.
The main section headings and their timings are determined exclusively by the introduction of technological innovations.
Introducing headings based on arbitrary chronological concepts such as 20th century or 21st century is artificial, meaningless and confusing.
If you want to make changes, then return the article to its original state and break it into parts using the original section headings. Forget about the 20th and 21st centuries.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.206.130.225 ( talk) 12:26, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
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This article appears to be an essay, entirely without references. DJ Clayworth ( talk) 17:03, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
technology came from time in new france it has been there for years and in history but personally idgaf
This is a copy, with variations, of Innovation, invention, and industrial research in Canada. DJ Clayworth ( talk) 21:25, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
He re-added all the content after I spilt into sub-articles! I'm open to suggestions! -- Allemandtando ( talk) 21:27, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
OK - I'm now entirely confused - Science and technology in Canada was the article I chunked off in the hope it would be more easy to manage and edit - but your redirect has erased one of the articles and now I'm totally confused about what goes where or what content is copied from where. We get paid for this right? there is just too much content for me to keep it straight in my head -- Allemandtando ( talk) 21:39, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
Hi
My name is Jeff Atkins, I am the author of the one original, now three, articles on Science and Technology in Canada. You are making a mess of articles that are perfectly coherent. If there are problems with references in the article on Diffusion of Technology in Canada then let’s add them. However to merge or redirect the articles on the Diffusion of Technology in Canada on one hand and Innovation, Invention and Industrial Research in Canada on the other hand constitutes most grievous vandalism. This is what happens when non-experts start to edit things they know nothing about.
Definitions
Diffusion of technology in Canada
The story of the spread of technology, in this case in Canada, no matter where it comes from, in the domains of transportation, communication, energy, materials, industry, public works, public services (health care), domestic/consumer life and defence.
Innovation, invention, and industrial research in Canada
The story of innovation, invention by Canadians only, in the fields of transportation, communication, energy, materials, industry, public works, public services (health care), domestic/consumer life and defence.
The spread of technology is one separate topic. The innovation and invention of technologies is another entirely separate subject. However there can be confusion with these two concepts.
Example
The steam locomotive was not invented in Canada, however it was introduced and used by many companies including the CPR. The article on the Diffusion of Technology in Canada therefore tells this story as well as hundreds of others relating to technologies that were not invented in Canada. It tells how they were introduced to Canada.
The BlackBerry on the other hand was invented in Canada. Therefore there are two stories to tell:
- One about its invention which is described in the article on Innovation, invention and industrial research in Canada. The invention and innovation article deals only with the story of Canadian innovation and invention - snowmobiles, BlackBerrys etc.
- And another about its introduction and use by the public and business, which is described in the article on the Diffusion of Technology in Canada.
The sections have similar divisions, Stone Age, Age of Sail etc. because people spread and invented similar technologies at the same time. However as pointed out above, diffusion on one hand and innovation and invention on the other are two different things and therefore need two separate articles even if the divisions in the articles are the same. The content of the two articles is almost totally different.
This can be seen in the length of the articles.
In terms of the number of technologies discussed, those in Diffusion of Technology in Canada far outnumber those in Innovation and invention in Canada because most of the technologies diffused in Canada came from other places and therefore the article is much longer than the one on invention and innovation.
Furthermore one of the benefits of the article on diffusion is to juxtapose technologies and in this way create insights into the type of life experienced by Canadians at given points in time as these technologies were introduced. Attempting to rely on what has been written on technology in the US in an effort to gain this appreciation is folly.
The article on innovation and invention is obviously intended to provide a summary of what was invented in Canada without having to search in many places to find the story.
Therefore please remove the redirect from the "edit this page" tab of the article on Innovation, Invention and Industrial Research in Canada. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.230.100.51 ( talk) 23:03, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
I hope this eliminates confusion.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.230.100.51 ( talk) 23:01, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
You are making a mess of articles that are perfectly coherent. actually by our standards they are not - leaving aside the current confusion caused by the redirect, there are a number of problems with the articles:
On a more general note, I *think* you have an account, please log into it when you edit because it helps to co-ordinate communication. -- Allemandtando ( talk) 23:20, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
Hello - Jeff Atkins Again
Dealing with the length is simple.
Break it into sections using the headers that are already there. Stone Age, Age of Sail etc.
I would do this but do not know how.
Include the references in each section and I can winnow out the ones that that do not belong.
Simple.
Of note. I have been editing the sections for style for several days. That is why you see all the changes in the history section.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.54.49.54 ( talk) 00:00, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Jeff Atkins - Hello Again
As stated earlier it is a mistake to consider that the article Innovation, Invention and Insustrial Research to be a duplicate of Diffusion of Technology in Canada. They are totally different in concept and almost totally different in content. Therefore please remove the redirect from the former to the latter and let the public see Innovation, Invention and Industrial Research in Canada.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.51.239.143 ( talk) 12:35, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Hello
I will start on the references. There is a learning curve because I do not know how to make references,(ie I think what you mean are footnotes), which is why there aren't any. However I will figure it out.
Jeff Atkins unsigned contribution by User:64.230.38.218
Hi Jeff
First please sign your userid when you write on a talk page. Please do this by putting four tildes like this ~~~~ at the end of what you write. Please do this even if you write your real name in the post.
Back to the answer: the citing of sources is described at Wikipedia:Citing sources. The short guide is that you do it like this: "Something was invented in Canada. <ref> All Canadian inventions. B & D MacKenzie. 2008 p24</ref>". Then in its own section called "References" you write {{reflist}} and all the references (footnotes) will be expanded. I hope that helps. DJ Clayworth ( talk) 15:37, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
I added the reference and wiki link for Jacques Ellul whom I have read but did not add a page number. I am fairly certain this is what is in that book as I have read it. I am just studying for job tests in the Canadian Government, so added a wiki link to Jean Talon too. May be I will add more references but it could be I have to read the article more for easy ones for me like the Jacques Ellul which I knew right off. I sometimes cover technology and innovation in my present government work. Pete ( talk) 07:53, 13 February 2014 (UTC)
The article is large enough to be moved to Wikibooks, since it's very long, but coherent in its content (after some of the glimpses). When I think of the diffusion of technology in Canada, the article should instead link to the current content in Wikibooks and then concentrate on recent (living) history and companies. This should avoid the hassle of how long the article is and loss of useful article content after someone eventually decides to downsize it. - Mardus ( talk) 03:46, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
tl;dr —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.135.88.44 ( talk) 21:10, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
Hello
I am the author. I have cleaned up the copy and the continuity and added footnotes. I think it is time to remove the tags. Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.230.37.226 ( talk) 21:12, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
Today, I have rated this article C class due to the article's apparent completeness. I would like to see more in-line referencing/citations before B class is achieved. Also, please ensure referencing follows Wikipedia:Manual of Style. PK T 15:41, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
Does that mean I can start copy-editing it now? Does this artical count as "stable" ?
I will put up the "{{GOCEinus}}" flag anyway and start.
Glubbdrubb (
talk) 13:19, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
A partial solution to the problems with this piece would be to create a template linking the different segments of this article, much as it is done in History of the petroleum industry in Canada. This is not difficult, Jeff; the easy solution would be to copy the oil industry template, rename it, modify as required and create appropriate links. Once the article is developed in this way,it would be easier for other Wikipedians to work on. Pmbcomm ( talk) 18:10, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
It's not like First Nations people were living in caves before the arrival of the sailing ships.....there's various technological innovations that are part of the Canadian identity/legacy which are decidedly FN in origin: the travois, tumpline, canoe (both the birch-bark and the big coastal cedar ones), post-and-frame/beam housing, quiggly holes and tipis, all kinds of unusual instruments of war/killing (particularly on the west coast), cooking technology (waterproof basket weavery, e.g. - which were fire resistant enough to be able to use for boiling, in fact...); not sure where to look for resources on this, just noting its relative absence. Also the introduction of certain mining techniques in the gold rush era in BC by Chinese is noteworthy, and the curious presence of smelted iron on the Northwest Coast by the time Cook/Vancouver et al were on the scene, ditto copper.... Skookum1 ( talk) 19:47, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
Carlaude, Boy did you make a mess of a fine article!
Jeff Atkins Chelsea Quebec Author —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.206.130.225 ( talk) 00:10, 16 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello Again
The article is about the history of technology.
The main section headings and their timings are determined exclusively by the introduction of technological innovations.
Introducing headings based on arbitrary chronological concepts such as 20th century or 21st century is artificial, meaningless and confusing.
If you want to make changes, then return the article to its original state and break it into parts using the original section headings. Forget about the 20th and 21st centuries.
Jeff Atkins —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.206.130.225 ( talk) 12:26, 17 December 2010 (UTC)