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Magiciandude: Te lo agradezco muchisimo. I will make sure to add them to the article.
My love is love 20:06, 15 June 2016 (UTC)reply
Jaja, de nada! I'm always happy to help! ;)
Erick (
talk) 20:10, 15 June 2016 (UTC)reply
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Instead of "English", you should write "Spanish:" to make clear that this is the original language of the title and song. Link it to
Spanish language
what nationalities are the Sanz and Shakira? State that they are singers
for the former artist's eighth → for Sanz's eighth
It was written by → The track was written by (alternation)
The song came about after Shakira approached Sanz telling him that she wanted to collaborate on something different from her own material. → Is this about "La Tortura" or "Te Lo..."? If it's about "La Tortura", it can be removed as it's not relevant here
and on the US → and on the American
Unlink "music video" as it's a common term
Infobox
I see "Remixes" on the cover, so I assume this was the artwork for a remixes EP. Is this the only cover that exists for this song? Anyway, please write a caption so that the readers are informed
Cover also needs alternative text
The genre and the recording time aren't referenced through the article's body, so they have to be removed
Unlink Sanz as a composer
Background and release
a close friend of Sanz was → comma after "Sanz"
During an interview with Billboard, Sanz talked about the second time he collaborated with Shakira which was on "Te Lo Agradezco, Pero No", following the worldwide success of "La Tortura" from the former's album Fijación Oral, Vol. 1 (2005). He stated, "I hadn't dared → The recording marks the second time Sanz and Shakira collaborate after "La Tortura" from the latter's Fij... During a Billboard interview, he stated, ...
he managed to do new things musically → he managed to expand his artistry by experimenting with new styles
of the song featuring several remixes → featuring several remixes of the song
Two remixes of the song were featured on the re-release of the album in 2007, El Tren de los Momentos: Edición Especial - one is by Luny Tunes and Tainy and the other one is dubbed "Benztown Mixdown" → Two remixes — the one done by Luny Tunes and the other one dubbed "Benztown Mixdown" — were included on...
was also included on Sanz's → was also part of Sanz's
Reception
Jason Birchmeier of the website → you can leave the "the website" part
also highlighted the song as one of the best on the album, adding → also pointed out the track as one of the best on the record.
was recognized as a Pop/Ballad of the Year → "the" instead of "a"
later and in its fifth charting week, on 10 March 2007, it ascended to the top → later, and ascended to the top in its fifth charting week in March 2007.
The single eventually spent → no "eventualy" needed
Add "chart" after both Latin Pop Airplay and Tropical Songs
it ranked as the 36th → it was ranked as the 36th
US → spell out to "United States"
topped the Top Latino → ...chart
write "platinum" and "gold" in capital letters
The certifications should be included in the lead as well
Music video
Unlink "music video"
on 11 January 2007. The clip for the song is a continuation of the one for Sanz's previous single → on 11 January 2007, acting as a continuation for the clip of Sanz's previous single
Year of release in (brackets) after "A La..."
where Alejandro Sanz dances → where Sanz is performing
choreography
was included on Sanz's → was also featured on Sanz's
It received a nomination → The visual... (for alternation)
Live performances
of the set list during → of the set list of
The song was performed live by the duo → The song was further performed live...
They performed it again at a humanitarian → Another appearance followed at a humanitarian
Track listings and formats
Flawless ;)
Charts
Fixed tables by myself for you
You need a certification table for the single (take
this as an example as it was also certified in Spain and Venezuela)
As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
Outcome
The article need a bit of work before I can pass it to GA. I put it On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and best regards,
Cartoon network freak (
talk) 17:04, 4 September 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you very much for the thorough review. All remarks are now Done.
My love is love 18:54, 5 September 2017 (UTC)reply
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Magiciandude: Te lo agradezco muchisimo. I will make sure to add them to the article.
My love is love 20:06, 15 June 2016 (UTC)reply
Jaja, de nada! I'm always happy to help! ;)
Erick (
talk) 20:10, 15 June 2016 (UTC)reply
GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Instead of "English", you should write "Spanish:" to make clear that this is the original language of the title and song. Link it to
Spanish language
what nationalities are the Sanz and Shakira? State that they are singers
for the former artist's eighth → for Sanz's eighth
It was written by → The track was written by (alternation)
The song came about after Shakira approached Sanz telling him that she wanted to collaborate on something different from her own material. → Is this about "La Tortura" or "Te Lo..."? If it's about "La Tortura", it can be removed as it's not relevant here
and on the US → and on the American
Unlink "music video" as it's a common term
Infobox
I see "Remixes" on the cover, so I assume this was the artwork for a remixes EP. Is this the only cover that exists for this song? Anyway, please write a caption so that the readers are informed
Cover also needs alternative text
The genre and the recording time aren't referenced through the article's body, so they have to be removed
Unlink Sanz as a composer
Background and release
a close friend of Sanz was → comma after "Sanz"
During an interview with Billboard, Sanz talked about the second time he collaborated with Shakira which was on "Te Lo Agradezco, Pero No", following the worldwide success of "La Tortura" from the former's album Fijación Oral, Vol. 1 (2005). He stated, "I hadn't dared → The recording marks the second time Sanz and Shakira collaborate after "La Tortura" from the latter's Fij... During a Billboard interview, he stated, ...
he managed to do new things musically → he managed to expand his artistry by experimenting with new styles
of the song featuring several remixes → featuring several remixes of the song
Two remixes of the song were featured on the re-release of the album in 2007, El Tren de los Momentos: Edición Especial - one is by Luny Tunes and Tainy and the other one is dubbed "Benztown Mixdown" → Two remixes — the one done by Luny Tunes and the other one dubbed "Benztown Mixdown" — were included on...
was also included on Sanz's → was also part of Sanz's
Reception
Jason Birchmeier of the website → you can leave the "the website" part
also highlighted the song as one of the best on the album, adding → also pointed out the track as one of the best on the record.
was recognized as a Pop/Ballad of the Year → "the" instead of "a"
later and in its fifth charting week, on 10 March 2007, it ascended to the top → later, and ascended to the top in its fifth charting week in March 2007.
The single eventually spent → no "eventualy" needed
Add "chart" after both Latin Pop Airplay and Tropical Songs
it ranked as the 36th → it was ranked as the 36th
US → spell out to "United States"
topped the Top Latino → ...chart
write "platinum" and "gold" in capital letters
The certifications should be included in the lead as well
Music video
Unlink "music video"
on 11 January 2007. The clip for the song is a continuation of the one for Sanz's previous single → on 11 January 2007, acting as a continuation for the clip of Sanz's previous single
Year of release in (brackets) after "A La..."
where Alejandro Sanz dances → where Sanz is performing
choreography
was included on Sanz's → was also featured on Sanz's
It received a nomination → The visual... (for alternation)
Live performances
of the set list during → of the set list of
The song was performed live by the duo → The song was further performed live...
They performed it again at a humanitarian → Another appearance followed at a humanitarian
Track listings and formats
Flawless ;)
Charts
Fixed tables by myself for you
You need a certification table for the single (take
this as an example as it was also certified in Spain and Venezuela)
As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
Outcome
The article need a bit of work before I can pass it to GA. I put it On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and best regards,
Cartoon network freak (
talk) 17:04, 4 September 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you very much for the thorough review. All remarks are now Done.
My love is love 18:54, 5 September 2017 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.