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I created this page amalgamating the Taste of Tasmania and Hobart Summer Festival pages. I do not wish to further expand as I am an employee of Hobart City Council and work on the event; I therefore wish to avoid COI issues. Happy to provide additional information if others wish to expand the page. mjec ( t/ c/ p) 23:27, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
Lautreca11 ( talk) 10:15, 16 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @ Lautreca11: I copy-edited the article. As a tip, refer to WP:SEAOFBLUE, we don't normally link common words or countries. A newly expanded article that is long enough. The article uses sources sources I cannot access, so I am going to assume good faith. The ones available are okay and mention what it is sourced. The picture is clear and free. No QPQ required; this is the first nomination. I am not approving it due to three queries. 1st: sourcing; I added a citation needed tag, that's the only issue. 2nd: neutrality, several sentences are written as promotion sentences written in a WP:Wikivoice tone: For example: "By having a strong main theme and a high profile, the festival is popular and relevant to locals who support this event with their community energy" or "The Taste of Summer highlights the region local produce". It is not the same as saying this: "According to The Writer / The Source, [text]", "The Writer / The Source considers that [text]". I recommend you to re-read the article as if you were the reader rather than the writer and identify these sentences and quotes and attribute them to the source." 3rd: the hook. It is not directly mentioned in the article, even though it is implied, it is part of the rules: "The facts of the hook need to appear in the article with a citation no later than at the end of the sentences in which they appear." (CC) Tbhotch ™ 19:45, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
This article is rated B-class on Wikipedia's
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This article is currently the subject of an educational assignment. |
I created this page amalgamating the Taste of Tasmania and Hobart Summer Festival pages. I do not wish to further expand as I am an employee of Hobart City Council and work on the event; I therefore wish to avoid COI issues. Happy to provide additional information if others wish to expand the page. mjec ( t/ c/ p) 23:27, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
Lautreca11 ( talk) 10:15, 16 May 2024 (UTC).
General eligibility:
Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: @ Lautreca11: I copy-edited the article. As a tip, refer to WP:SEAOFBLUE, we don't normally link common words or countries. A newly expanded article that is long enough. The article uses sources sources I cannot access, so I am going to assume good faith. The ones available are okay and mention what it is sourced. The picture is clear and free. No QPQ required; this is the first nomination. I am not approving it due to three queries. 1st: sourcing; I added a citation needed tag, that's the only issue. 2nd: neutrality, several sentences are written as promotion sentences written in a WP:Wikivoice tone: For example: "By having a strong main theme and a high profile, the festival is popular and relevant to locals who support this event with their community energy" or "The Taste of Summer highlights the region local produce". It is not the same as saying this: "According to The Writer / The Source, [text]", "The Writer / The Source considers that [text]". I recommend you to re-read the article as if you were the reader rather than the writer and identify these sentences and quotes and attribute them to the source." 3rd: the hook. It is not directly mentioned in the article, even though it is implied, it is part of the rules: "The facts of the hook need to appear in the article with a citation no later than at the end of the sentences in which they appear." (CC) Tbhotch ™ 19:45, 20 May 2024 (UTC)