Alright, I guess that's fine, that's always been something that bothers me, but if dictionary reference says it's acceptable, then I guess it must be okay.
Privacy
"burgeoning success risks irking Congress, regulators and privacy advocates." As this is a quotation, it needs a citation, although I assume that quote comes from ref 11?
That's according to the external links tool at the top of the page, but if they work for you, I guess that's alright as well.
The forbes link can bring up an interstitial (which will change the URL) and the WSJ link can generate some query parameters (and not render the content), so that could be tripping the script up. Which external links tool are you using?
Protonk (
talk)
15:20, 26 September 2014 (UTC)reply
Is there any way to turn the second external link into an inline citation? If not, that's alright, it won't keep the article from reaching GA.
Because it's an interview, it's not a very good reliable source for an in-line citation. 15:20, 26 September 2014 (UTC)
Overall, everything looks great, there are just a few minor prose and references issues to be worked out. I see you are busy with Yelp right now, so I'll give you plenty of time to fix these minor problems. Nice work, --
Bentvfan54321 (
talk)
15:04, 26 September 2014 (UTC)reply
Alright, I guess that's fine, that's always been something that bothers me, but if dictionary reference says it's acceptable, then I guess it must be okay.
Privacy
"burgeoning success risks irking Congress, regulators and privacy advocates." As this is a quotation, it needs a citation, although I assume that quote comes from ref 11?
That's according to the external links tool at the top of the page, but if they work for you, I guess that's alright as well.
The forbes link can bring up an interstitial (which will change the URL) and the WSJ link can generate some query parameters (and not render the content), so that could be tripping the script up. Which external links tool are you using?
Protonk (
talk)
15:20, 26 September 2014 (UTC)reply
Is there any way to turn the second external link into an inline citation? If not, that's alright, it won't keep the article from reaching GA.
Because it's an interview, it's not a very good reliable source for an in-line citation. 15:20, 26 September 2014 (UTC)
Overall, everything looks great, there are just a few minor prose and references issues to be worked out. I see you are busy with Yelp right now, so I'll give you plenty of time to fix these minor problems. Nice work, --
Bentvfan54321 (
talk)
15:04, 26 September 2014 (UTC)reply