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"I Jerel Lee Palmer did this from South Carolina State University in a United States court, is depicted upon the surrounding walls." This is out of my pay grade as a copy editor. Lewis Goudy ( talk) 23:46, 14 December 2016 (UTC)gr
This sentence also needs work: "Embedded in the floor of the library is a mural of La Amistad - which school tradition says must never be stepped upon - referring to the mutiny by slaves, who took control of that ship and later won their freedom in a United States court, is depicted upon the surrounding walls." (For one thing, a "mural" is on a wall, not a floor; though a floor can certainly be painted. But the main problem is that it's at least two sentences run together. Just guessing -- since I have never been inside this building -- is the ship as such depicted on the floor, and the mutiny on the walls?) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.17.179.75 ( talk) 23:47, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
the band was a giant hit performing in the jan 20 inaugural parade and with grand uniforms drum majors and majorettes. pls add fotos for band here and to college website thanks , willy bama grad @ 24.44.215.132 ( talk) 18:53, 23 January 2017 (UTC) willy4tornadoes
The history of Talladega College began on November 20, 1865 when three former slaves, William Savery, Thomas Tarrant and Ambrose Headen, met in convention with a group of new freedmen in Mobile, Alabama. This the original sentence. I removed Ambrose Headen's name as the institution's website does not say Ambrose Headen traveled to the convention. I'm open to any new imformation. Thank you. -- Phiggs ( talk) 21:37, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
Ernest A. Greene, a lawyer and state legislator in Illinois shouod be added to notable alumni. FloridaArmy ( talk) 14:32, 22 July 2022 (UTC)
![]() | This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
Archive 1 |
"I Jerel Lee Palmer did this from South Carolina State University in a United States court, is depicted upon the surrounding walls." This is out of my pay grade as a copy editor. Lewis Goudy ( talk) 23:46, 14 December 2016 (UTC)gr
This sentence also needs work: "Embedded in the floor of the library is a mural of La Amistad - which school tradition says must never be stepped upon - referring to the mutiny by slaves, who took control of that ship and later won their freedom in a United States court, is depicted upon the surrounding walls." (For one thing, a "mural" is on a wall, not a floor; though a floor can certainly be painted. But the main problem is that it's at least two sentences run together. Just guessing -- since I have never been inside this building -- is the ship as such depicted on the floor, and the mutiny on the walls?) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.17.179.75 ( talk) 23:47, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
the band was a giant hit performing in the jan 20 inaugural parade and with grand uniforms drum majors and majorettes. pls add fotos for band here and to college website thanks , willy bama grad @ 24.44.215.132 ( talk) 18:53, 23 January 2017 (UTC) willy4tornadoes
The history of Talladega College began on November 20, 1865 when three former slaves, William Savery, Thomas Tarrant and Ambrose Headen, met in convention with a group of new freedmen in Mobile, Alabama. This the original sentence. I removed Ambrose Headen's name as the institution's website does not say Ambrose Headen traveled to the convention. I'm open to any new imformation. Thank you. -- Phiggs ( talk) 21:37, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
Ernest A. Greene, a lawyer and state legislator in Illinois shouod be added to notable alumni. FloridaArmy ( talk) 14:32, 22 July 2022 (UTC)