"Other critics felt the song was a strong, irresistible dance pop song strictly made for the dance floor with a great carefree message" - comma after 'dance pop song'
Done
Link dance pop. Auto-tune can be linked earlier than it is.
Done
Writing and inspiration
This section is quite short. Can I suggest you merge this with the 'Composition' section?
'"Take It Off" was written by Kesha, alongside Dr. Luke, and Claude Kelly.' - don't need a comma after Dr. Luke
Both issues done.
Composition
The header for the audio sample would be better as "Take It Off". Regardless, the title should be enclosed by quote marks.
Audio is lower then original, the Audiowhatever wont let me lower it anymore. Myself and Candyo had the same issue with Baby.
"Music reviewer Bill Lamb, commented on..." - don't need a comma after Bill Lamb
Done
"Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting," → Lamb further commented that the lyrics were to those of Lady Gaga's, commenting,
What about the lyrics are similar to Gaga's?
"Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting, "followers of Lady Gaga's Monster Ball Tour will be familiar with this point of view [about free expression].""
Critical reception
"He was concerned with the overall lyrical depth and over use of auto-tune but he" - over-use should be hyphenated, comma after auto-tune
Done
with the volume turned up and the chorus encouraging you to "take it off," - a quote in a quote should have inverted commas, not two sets of quote marks
I have spotted inconsistencies between this section, the table, and references. Please check all chart positions are accurate throughout.
Oops, there was issues with New Zealand in Chart performance, has now been corrected. Done
Ref 10 would look better at end of sentence
Done
Link Billboard Hot 100
Done
"In Canada, the song ascended and descended the chart for twelve weeks before finally dropping off the chart. On July 13, 2010, the song re-entered..." - give a date when the song first dropped off
four-teen should be fourteen
Done
Is there a reason why you omit the NZ cert?
Was certified after i nominated, didnt think to add it. Done
Music videos
Is there only one review of the first video?
All i could find unfortunately.
Your main source for the second video has a review which is not discussed in the article
Yes, but i dont use his for reviews on anything, good for composition and stuff but he's not very neutral, i have yet to read a review where he doesnt call her a drunk slut or something. His reviews arn't neural, if it wasnt published by NYC holding i wouldnt include it at all.
Live performances
NBC and Today Show need linking. Today Show needs italics (note: it is called Today or The Today Show, not Today Show)
"Other critics felt the song was a strong, irresistible dance pop song strictly made for the dance floor with a great carefree message" - comma after 'dance pop song'
Done
Link dance pop. Auto-tune can be linked earlier than it is.
Done
Writing and inspiration
This section is quite short. Can I suggest you merge this with the 'Composition' section?
'"Take It Off" was written by Kesha, alongside Dr. Luke, and Claude Kelly.' - don't need a comma after Dr. Luke
Both issues done.
Composition
The header for the audio sample would be better as "Take It Off". Regardless, the title should be enclosed by quote marks.
Audio is lower then original, the Audiowhatever wont let me lower it anymore. Myself and Candyo had the same issue with Baby.
"Music reviewer Bill Lamb, commented on..." - don't need a comma after Bill Lamb
Done
"Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting," → Lamb further commented that the lyrics were to those of Lady Gaga's, commenting,
What about the lyrics are similar to Gaga's?
"Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting, "followers of Lady Gaga's Monster Ball Tour will be familiar with this point of view [about free expression].""
Critical reception
"He was concerned with the overall lyrical depth and over use of auto-tune but he" - over-use should be hyphenated, comma after auto-tune
Done
with the volume turned up and the chorus encouraging you to "take it off," - a quote in a quote should have inverted commas, not two sets of quote marks
I have spotted inconsistencies between this section, the table, and references. Please check all chart positions are accurate throughout.
Oops, there was issues with New Zealand in Chart performance, has now been corrected. Done
Ref 10 would look better at end of sentence
Done
Link Billboard Hot 100
Done
"In Canada, the song ascended and descended the chart for twelve weeks before finally dropping off the chart. On July 13, 2010, the song re-entered..." - give a date when the song first dropped off
four-teen should be fourteen
Done
Is there a reason why you omit the NZ cert?
Was certified after i nominated, didnt think to add it. Done
Music videos
Is there only one review of the first video?
All i could find unfortunately.
Your main source for the second video has a review which is not discussed in the article
Yes, but i dont use his for reviews on anything, good for composition and stuff but he's not very neutral, i have yet to read a review where he doesnt call her a drunk slut or something. His reviews arn't neural, if it wasnt published by NYC holding i wouldnt include it at all.
Live performances
NBC and Today Show need linking. Today Show needs italics (note: it is called Today or The Today Show, not Today Show)