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Painting of Taiyin Xingjun, the Western Xia (982–1227), in Hermitage Museum.
... that Taiyin Xingjun(pictured) is considered the original Chinese moon goddess, even though
Chang'e is sometimes viewed as an accidental resident and is also regarded as an incarnation of her? Source:
找神!拜對正廟有緣神: 拓展「神脈」,更要抱對「佛腳」!
Hi, who will review my DYK? And how many days do I need to wait for a review?
TheGreatPeng (
talk) 18:45, 26 April 2024 (UTC)reply
Comment. Please be patient. This is a volunteer effort, and the average wait time for a review could be around two to three weeks, perhaps sooner or later depending on who is active. Please be mindful of
WP:DYK200. It may help to present alternate hooks for consideration.
Viriditas (
talk) 20:56, 26 April 2024 (UTC)reply
But it was too long to wait; even my second DYK was reviewed.
TheGreatPeng (
talk) 05:29, 9 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Article is sourced well, no plagiarism, new enough, long enough, but needs another pass over for grammar, spelling, and tone. Article could also use clarification about which aspects of worship of this god apply to China/specific regions of China, and which to Taiwan. Hook should also be simplified. How about: ...that Taiyin Xingjun (pictured) is the original Chinese moon goddess, but is often confused with Chang'e?
@
TheGreatPeng: Hi, please make the changes mentioned above, the article has some issues with tone. On review, it seems like there are several quotes which are not distinguished from the text of the article, these should be incorporated into the text or at least separated into quote blocks. See:
WP:QUOTE
The new hook you suggested sounds good, with slight correction: "...that Taiyin Xingjun (pictured) is the original Chinese moon goddess, while the more famous Chang'e is considered her incarnation? "
@
Luiysia: I've done my best to adjust the grammar and tone, even though I'm not a copyeditor. However, I'm unsure about how to format certain text from books or historical documents as a quote block since it's not dialogue. Could you provide an example quote block, and I'll adjust accordingly?
WP:QUOTE is not helpful. Thanks!
TheGreatPeng (
talk) 10:47, 24 May 2024 (UTC)reply
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Painting of Taiyin Xingjun, the Western Xia (982–1227), in Hermitage Museum.
... that Taiyin Xingjun(pictured) is considered the original Chinese moon goddess, even though
Chang'e is sometimes viewed as an accidental resident and is also regarded as an incarnation of her? Source:
找神!拜對正廟有緣神: 拓展「神脈」,更要抱對「佛腳」!
Hi, who will review my DYK? And how many days do I need to wait for a review?
TheGreatPeng (
talk) 18:45, 26 April 2024 (UTC)reply
Comment. Please be patient. This is a volunteer effort, and the average wait time for a review could be around two to three weeks, perhaps sooner or later depending on who is active. Please be mindful of
WP:DYK200. It may help to present alternate hooks for consideration.
Viriditas (
talk) 20:56, 26 April 2024 (UTC)reply
But it was too long to wait; even my second DYK was reviewed.
TheGreatPeng (
talk) 05:29, 9 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Article is sourced well, no plagiarism, new enough, long enough, but needs another pass over for grammar, spelling, and tone. Article could also use clarification about which aspects of worship of this god apply to China/specific regions of China, and which to Taiwan. Hook should also be simplified. How about: ...that Taiyin Xingjun (pictured) is the original Chinese moon goddess, but is often confused with Chang'e?
@
TheGreatPeng: Hi, please make the changes mentioned above, the article has some issues with tone. On review, it seems like there are several quotes which are not distinguished from the text of the article, these should be incorporated into the text or at least separated into quote blocks. See:
WP:QUOTE
The new hook you suggested sounds good, with slight correction: "...that Taiyin Xingjun (pictured) is the original Chinese moon goddess, while the more famous Chang'e is considered her incarnation? "
@
Luiysia: I've done my best to adjust the grammar and tone, even though I'm not a copyeditor. However, I'm unsure about how to format certain text from books or historical documents as a quote block since it's not dialogue. Could you provide an example quote block, and I'll adjust accordingly?
WP:QUOTE is not helpful. Thanks!
TheGreatPeng (
talk) 10:47, 24 May 2024 (UTC)reply