It may take me a couple days to get through every item on this list, but you can start addressing any points I raise immediately. If you disagree with any of my comments, don't hesitate to argue them - I'm willing to be persuaded. Once complete, I'll be using this review to score points in the 2018
wikicup.
Argento Surfer (
talk)
17:58, 18 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Lead
"a Link light rail extension will connect..." - How long will this be once finished? I ask because I'm curious, but also because I think it would bring a sense of scale to the proposal. If it's not definite or a solid source isn't available, that's ok.
It will be about 34 miles from Seattle to Tacoma, with the last segment (a 7-mile extension) opened in 2030. I would rather save this information for the
Tacoma Dome Link Extension article, once I get around to writing it.
Fair enough.
History
1200 stall garage in 1994 + 1200 stall garage in 2000 = 2400 stalls, but the infobox says 2,283. I'm guessing this is a rounding error?
Sometime between 2010 and 2012, it seems that it was reduced from
2,410 stalls to the present 2,283. I can't find a definite source or reason why.
Probably some minor remodel.
""iconic face" for an "architectural abomination"." - suggest "for what The News Tribune called an "architectural..."
Done.
"halt the return of Amtrak trains to the bypass until full implementation..." - is there an ETA for this?
So far, the only date is late 2018.
Future
"expansion program, approved by voters " - I don't think this comma's needed.
Removed.
Station layout
Peirce Transit is linked in History and the infobox. This one is
WP:OVERLINK
Removed.
Services
Another Pierce Transit link
Removed.
Seattle is linked twice here, but not in History, which is its first use.
It may take me a couple days to get through every item on this list, but you can start addressing any points I raise immediately. If you disagree with any of my comments, don't hesitate to argue them - I'm willing to be persuaded. Once complete, I'll be using this review to score points in the 2018
wikicup.
Argento Surfer (
talk)
17:58, 18 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Lead
"a Link light rail extension will connect..." - How long will this be once finished? I ask because I'm curious, but also because I think it would bring a sense of scale to the proposal. If it's not definite or a solid source isn't available, that's ok.
It will be about 34 miles from Seattle to Tacoma, with the last segment (a 7-mile extension) opened in 2030. I would rather save this information for the
Tacoma Dome Link Extension article, once I get around to writing it.
Fair enough.
History
1200 stall garage in 1994 + 1200 stall garage in 2000 = 2400 stalls, but the infobox says 2,283. I'm guessing this is a rounding error?
Sometime between 2010 and 2012, it seems that it was reduced from
2,410 stalls to the present 2,283. I can't find a definite source or reason why.
Probably some minor remodel.
""iconic face" for an "architectural abomination"." - suggest "for what The News Tribune called an "architectural..."
Done.
"halt the return of Amtrak trains to the bypass until full implementation..." - is there an ETA for this?
So far, the only date is late 2018.
Future
"expansion program, approved by voters " - I don't think this comma's needed.
Removed.
Station layout
Peirce Transit is linked in History and the infobox. This one is
WP:OVERLINK
Removed.
Services
Another Pierce Transit link
Removed.
Seattle is linked twice here, but not in History, which is its first use.