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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 01:34, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
Much of what I mean is that the article needs to set the context, just in a few words here and there about the political situation at the time, the relationship between Mussolini and the Catholic Church, etc. The general reader can't be expected to click on every link to understand what's happening. eg Benito Mussolini's importance is not explained, his role in Italy, nor what was the situation of Catholic Church at that time. 1922 was after WWI, what was going on then regarding Mussolini, the Church etc. re Chigi library donation? The general reader (like me) has no idea what it is or why it is important. Nothing like Chigi library is self evident, as I'd never heard of it. (Much of this info could come from other sources, e.g. articles on Mussolini on wiki might have info plus references on what was going on at this time re the Catholic Church, the importance of Chigi library, etc. Also, explain a little about Fascism and what impact it had on the Catholic Church. In other words, the article doesn't explain why what Tacchi Venturi did was important - just a few sentences to set the stage would do.) This is a very interesting article and would make a GA with a little work. Feel free to ask me questions. MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:46, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Coongratulations! MathewTownsend ( talk) 18:19, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for your review. I have added the names of the Five Powers. Savidan 18:20, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 01:34, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
Much of what I mean is that the article needs to set the context, just in a few words here and there about the political situation at the time, the relationship between Mussolini and the Catholic Church, etc. The general reader can't be expected to click on every link to understand what's happening. eg Benito Mussolini's importance is not explained, his role in Italy, nor what was the situation of Catholic Church at that time. 1922 was after WWI, what was going on then regarding Mussolini, the Church etc. re Chigi library donation? The general reader (like me) has no idea what it is or why it is important. Nothing like Chigi library is self evident, as I'd never heard of it. (Much of this info could come from other sources, e.g. articles on Mussolini on wiki might have info plus references on what was going on at this time re the Catholic Church, the importance of Chigi library, etc. Also, explain a little about Fascism and what impact it had on the Catholic Church. In other words, the article doesn't explain why what Tacchi Venturi did was important - just a few sentences to set the stage would do.) This is a very interesting article and would make a GA with a little work. Feel free to ask me questions. MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:46, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Coongratulations! MathewTownsend ( talk) 18:19, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for your review. I have added the names of the Five Powers. Savidan 18:20, 21 January 2012 (UTC)