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@ Vini6305: Placing on a 14-day hold for changes to be made. This is a longer-than-normal hold because of the unusual volume of copyediting needs; I've done 30 GAs and this is the largest number of copy changes I've asked for by far. If you have questions about the last two items, let me know and I can assist. The news section is going to take some work to not sound like "anchor goes here, news director goes there". Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
Many copy changes are issues in translation. As a Spanish speaker, I can definitely hear the underlying issues from Portuguese.
signed on the air 10 months after receiving its license from the federal government, on March 10, 1985, beingto
signed on the air on March 10, 1985, 10 months after receiving its license from the federal government, making it...
premiering in February 1999 the BahiaCop→
debuting the BahiaCop in February 1999
Salvador the seventh capital to receive the technology in the country.—
making Salvador the seventh city in Brazil to receive digital television.
On May 7, 1984, Televisão Bahia Ltda. received a concession to operate a television broadcasting service in Salvador in a decree issued by then-president João Figueiredo.
in addition to the presence of various authorities, such as Governor of Bahia João Durval Carneiro, the former Governor Antônio Carlos Magalhães, in addition to Archbishop of Salvador and Primate of Brazil, Dom Avelar Brandão Vilelato
as well as Governor of Bahia João Durval Carneiro, former governor Antônio Carlos Magalhães, and Catholic cardinal Avelar Brandão Vilela. (We have an article on Brandão fyi)
which had been its affiliate since 1969
TV Aratu returned, after 64 days, to retransmitting Globo's programs, but TV Bahia did not accept the order immediately and once again both broadcast the same programming. On April 4, however, TV Bahia resumed the broadcast of Manchete's programmingto
TV Aratu returned to rebroadcasting Globo programs, but TV Bahia did not immediately comply, resulting in both channels broadcasting the same programming until April 4, when TV Bahia resumed broadcasting Manchete programming.
making TV Bahia the fifth Globo station uplinked on the service
A year later, due to the polemic involving the lack of images of TV Bahia in the coverage of May 16 protests, rumors circulated in the press reported that the channel would lose its affiliation with the network due to a supposed destabilization in the relationship between the groups— there's a dire need for an interlanguage link that looks like this: May 16 protests I'd rewrite as
A year later, after TV Bahia's lack of coverage of the May 16 protests created controversy, rumors circulated that Globo would remove its affiliation due to a supposed deterioration in the relationship between the network and its affiliate.
which ratified having a good relationshipto
which reaffirmed that it had a good relationship
In 2008, a dispute among TV Bahia shareholders began, with parties vying for control of the business. ACM Júnior won out, and four years later, in June 2012, César Mata Pires sold his stake
there was an investment of R$9 million in a new transmitter, a new 160-meter (520 ft) antenna, and a new master control.
On July 21, 2012, Nelson Pelegrino, a candidate for mayor of Salvador, filed a lawsuit claiming that a report on the anniversary of Magalhães's death the previous's day featuring an interview with ACM Neto—his grandson, son of ACM Júnior, and a rival candidate—unfairly benefited Neto.Consider linking isonomy or replacing it with the more idiomatic "equality before the law".
The reason would be the losses the group went through in 2018.change to part of the previous sentence:
, after the company lost money in 2018.
In the same year, on December,→
That December,
Move this section down to the bottom and label it "Technical information". We made a change in how the US pages are organized to provide a more natural flow: history -> programming -> news -> subchannels/etc.
channel 29 UHF→
UHF channel 29
and on December 1 of the same year, it officially launched it,Split out as separate sentence and reduce redundancy:
Digital broadcasts officially started on December 1, making the capital of Bahia...
using PSIP to display TV Bahia's virtual channel as 11 on digital television receivers.→
using virtual channel 11. I'd like to put this in a nice box and frame it. No Brazil article should mention PSIP! PSIP is a specific protocol in the ATSC (1.0) standard with no bearing on anything ISDB-T, but because Wikipedia articles on television elsewhere have looked at US pages, it propagated well beyond where it should have. I have gone through and even done mass AWB edits to remove mentions of PSIP from tables and infoboxes. (This advice needs to be taken back to the ptwiki article too.)
local generation— Where Portuguese would use "generar", we'd probably use "produce". Suggested rewrite of this area:
After broadcasting the second leg of the Cruzeiro–Flamengo match for the Copa do Brasil, the signal was shut off at 11:59 pm and replaced by a notice from the Ministry of Science, Technology, Innovation and Communications (MCTIC) and ANATEL about the switch-off.
At Mosaico...→
On Mosaico...
at February 18→
on February 18
TV Bahia was the first Rede Globo affiliate to produce locally a telenovela. The attraction, entitled Danada de Sabida, premiered on January 7, 1997. Broadcast exclusively in the state, the production was inspired by the book Já Podeis da Pátria Filhos, by the writer João Ubaldo Ribeiro, having been recorded in the cities of Cachoeira, São Francisco do Conde and São Gonçalo dos Campos.Suggesting several changes, note bolding.
TV Bahia was the first Rede Globo affiliate to locally produce a telenovela. Danada de Sabida premiered on January 7, 1997. Broadcast exclusively in the state, the production was inspired by the book Já Podeis da Pátria Filhos, by João Ubaldo Ribeiro, having been filmed in the cities of Cachoeira, São Francisco do Conde and São Gonçalo dos Campos.
On January 5, 2019, was broadcast the first edition of musical program Sente o Som, hosted by Camila Marinho and directed by Marcela Amorim. The seven programs of the first season were scheduled for interviews with artists from Bahia and musical performances. In the same year, four editions of the program were broadcast in Portugal, as part of the special programming of carnival on the cable channel Globo Now. In Portugal, the program was aired from February 26 to 28, at 20h50.change to
Musical program Sente o Som, hosted by Camila Marinho and directed by Marcela Amorim, debuted on January 5, 2019. The seven episodes of the first season featured interviews with artists from Bahia and musical performances. Four episodes were broadcast in Portugal as part of programming for Carnival on the Globo Now cable channel.
occupying several spaces of TV Globo programming and local programming during the periodchange to
preempting several TV Globo and local programs
special programs with the best moments→
highlights of the event
comments by→
commentary by
General comment: There is too much detail about individual anchor movements and program renames in this section, and it can be very hard to follow for a casual reader. Consider slimming this down and reading our guideline on Summary style. This section will need the most work and want you to come up with textual revisions to make it less dense. We may need to go back and forth on this section in particular and it will likely require more copyediting when slimmed down.
, being anchored by Paulo→
and anchored by Paulo(note no comma)
Globo's former newscaster— "former Globo newscaster"
The morning show began to be presented in duo→
The morning show switched to a two-anchor format
Also in 1993, TV Bahia re-released Bahia Agora, this time aired in two editions, replacing Jornal da Manhã and BATV 1ª EdiçãoChange to
Jornal da Manhã and BATV 1ª Edição readopted the Bahia Agora name that year.(No need to mention the anchors stayed)
on the 1996 municipal elections→ "in" (another preposition error)
premiered replacingadd comma
The new newscast brought together, in its presentation, the anchors of both replaced programs, also counting with Genildo Lawinscky's comments.You could straight up say the programs were merged. There may be too much detail about non-notable presenters.
also continued to command the news program— I assume you meant "host"?
I have randomly selected 12 of the 144 references for spot checks: 14, 15, 22, 47, 48, 76, 82, 108, 113, 122, 140, 144 (redrew for more even section coverage). Be back soon for this.
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@ Vini6305: Placing on a 14-day hold for changes to be made. This is a longer-than-normal hold because of the unusual volume of copyediting needs; I've done 30 GAs and this is the largest number of copy changes I've asked for by far. If you have questions about the last two items, let me know and I can assist. The news section is going to take some work to not sound like "anchor goes here, news director goes there". Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:30, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
Many copy changes are issues in translation. As a Spanish speaker, I can definitely hear the underlying issues from Portuguese.
signed on the air 10 months after receiving its license from the federal government, on March 10, 1985, beingto
signed on the air on March 10, 1985, 10 months after receiving its license from the federal government, making it...
premiering in February 1999 the BahiaCop→
debuting the BahiaCop in February 1999
Salvador the seventh capital to receive the technology in the country.—
making Salvador the seventh city in Brazil to receive digital television.
On May 7, 1984, Televisão Bahia Ltda. received a concession to operate a television broadcasting service in Salvador in a decree issued by then-president João Figueiredo.
in addition to the presence of various authorities, such as Governor of Bahia João Durval Carneiro, the former Governor Antônio Carlos Magalhães, in addition to Archbishop of Salvador and Primate of Brazil, Dom Avelar Brandão Vilelato
as well as Governor of Bahia João Durval Carneiro, former governor Antônio Carlos Magalhães, and Catholic cardinal Avelar Brandão Vilela. (We have an article on Brandão fyi)
which had been its affiliate since 1969
TV Aratu returned, after 64 days, to retransmitting Globo's programs, but TV Bahia did not accept the order immediately and once again both broadcast the same programming. On April 4, however, TV Bahia resumed the broadcast of Manchete's programmingto
TV Aratu returned to rebroadcasting Globo programs, but TV Bahia did not immediately comply, resulting in both channels broadcasting the same programming until April 4, when TV Bahia resumed broadcasting Manchete programming.
making TV Bahia the fifth Globo station uplinked on the service
A year later, due to the polemic involving the lack of images of TV Bahia in the coverage of May 16 protests, rumors circulated in the press reported that the channel would lose its affiliation with the network due to a supposed destabilization in the relationship between the groups— there's a dire need for an interlanguage link that looks like this: May 16 protests I'd rewrite as
A year later, after TV Bahia's lack of coverage of the May 16 protests created controversy, rumors circulated that Globo would remove its affiliation due to a supposed deterioration in the relationship between the network and its affiliate.
which ratified having a good relationshipto
which reaffirmed that it had a good relationship
In 2008, a dispute among TV Bahia shareholders began, with parties vying for control of the business. ACM Júnior won out, and four years later, in June 2012, César Mata Pires sold his stake
there was an investment of R$9 million in a new transmitter, a new 160-meter (520 ft) antenna, and a new master control.
On July 21, 2012, Nelson Pelegrino, a candidate for mayor of Salvador, filed a lawsuit claiming that a report on the anniversary of Magalhães's death the previous's day featuring an interview with ACM Neto—his grandson, son of ACM Júnior, and a rival candidate—unfairly benefited Neto.Consider linking isonomy or replacing it with the more idiomatic "equality before the law".
The reason would be the losses the group went through in 2018.change to part of the previous sentence:
, after the company lost money in 2018.
In the same year, on December,→
That December,
Move this section down to the bottom and label it "Technical information". We made a change in how the US pages are organized to provide a more natural flow: history -> programming -> news -> subchannels/etc.
channel 29 UHF→
UHF channel 29
and on December 1 of the same year, it officially launched it,Split out as separate sentence and reduce redundancy:
Digital broadcasts officially started on December 1, making the capital of Bahia...
using PSIP to display TV Bahia's virtual channel as 11 on digital television receivers.→
using virtual channel 11. I'd like to put this in a nice box and frame it. No Brazil article should mention PSIP! PSIP is a specific protocol in the ATSC (1.0) standard with no bearing on anything ISDB-T, but because Wikipedia articles on television elsewhere have looked at US pages, it propagated well beyond where it should have. I have gone through and even done mass AWB edits to remove mentions of PSIP from tables and infoboxes. (This advice needs to be taken back to the ptwiki article too.)
local generation— Where Portuguese would use "generar", we'd probably use "produce". Suggested rewrite of this area:
After broadcasting the second leg of the Cruzeiro–Flamengo match for the Copa do Brasil, the signal was shut off at 11:59 pm and replaced by a notice from the Ministry of Science, Technology, Innovation and Communications (MCTIC) and ANATEL about the switch-off.
At Mosaico...→
On Mosaico...
at February 18→
on February 18
TV Bahia was the first Rede Globo affiliate to produce locally a telenovela. The attraction, entitled Danada de Sabida, premiered on January 7, 1997. Broadcast exclusively in the state, the production was inspired by the book Já Podeis da Pátria Filhos, by the writer João Ubaldo Ribeiro, having been recorded in the cities of Cachoeira, São Francisco do Conde and São Gonçalo dos Campos.Suggesting several changes, note bolding.
TV Bahia was the first Rede Globo affiliate to locally produce a telenovela. Danada de Sabida premiered on January 7, 1997. Broadcast exclusively in the state, the production was inspired by the book Já Podeis da Pátria Filhos, by João Ubaldo Ribeiro, having been filmed in the cities of Cachoeira, São Francisco do Conde and São Gonçalo dos Campos.
On January 5, 2019, was broadcast the first edition of musical program Sente o Som, hosted by Camila Marinho and directed by Marcela Amorim. The seven programs of the first season were scheduled for interviews with artists from Bahia and musical performances. In the same year, four editions of the program were broadcast in Portugal, as part of the special programming of carnival on the cable channel Globo Now. In Portugal, the program was aired from February 26 to 28, at 20h50.change to
Musical program Sente o Som, hosted by Camila Marinho and directed by Marcela Amorim, debuted on January 5, 2019. The seven episodes of the first season featured interviews with artists from Bahia and musical performances. Four episodes were broadcast in Portugal as part of programming for Carnival on the Globo Now cable channel.
occupying several spaces of TV Globo programming and local programming during the periodchange to
preempting several TV Globo and local programs
special programs with the best moments→
highlights of the event
comments by→
commentary by
General comment: There is too much detail about individual anchor movements and program renames in this section, and it can be very hard to follow for a casual reader. Consider slimming this down and reading our guideline on Summary style. This section will need the most work and want you to come up with textual revisions to make it less dense. We may need to go back and forth on this section in particular and it will likely require more copyediting when slimmed down.
, being anchored by Paulo→
and anchored by Paulo(note no comma)
Globo's former newscaster— "former Globo newscaster"
The morning show began to be presented in duo→
The morning show switched to a two-anchor format
Also in 1993, TV Bahia re-released Bahia Agora, this time aired in two editions, replacing Jornal da Manhã and BATV 1ª EdiçãoChange to
Jornal da Manhã and BATV 1ª Edição readopted the Bahia Agora name that year.(No need to mention the anchors stayed)
on the 1996 municipal elections→ "in" (another preposition error)
premiered replacingadd comma
The new newscast brought together, in its presentation, the anchors of both replaced programs, also counting with Genildo Lawinscky's comments.You could straight up say the programs were merged. There may be too much detail about non-notable presenters.
also continued to command the news program— I assume you meant "host"?
I have randomly selected 12 of the 144 references for spot checks: 14, 15, 22, 47, 48, 76, 82, 108, 113, 122, 140, 144 (redrew for more even section coverage). Be back soon for this.
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field.