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"300 miles (480 km)" Use adj=on to convert to adjectival form
"he was invested as a Companion of the Order of the Bath and promoted to Major". Do not capitalise "major" here. Could add your link and date of the Gazette (which appears later)
"Colonel Pierce Charles Joyce" -> "Lieutenant Colonel Pierce Charles Joyce"
"10th Australian Light Horse Brigade led by Major A. C. N. "Harry" Olden" Major issue: there was no 10th Light Brigade. Olden commanded the
10th Light Horse Regiment. And link to that article.
"General Gourand" -> General Henri Gouraud
Unlink Aqaba, Damascus, t Sykes-Picot Agreement (duplicate links)
Post-war years
Merge the paragraph beginning with "Lawrence worked with Thomas" into the previous paragraph.
Merge the paragraph beginning with "He campaigned" into the previous paragraph.
Link The Times, The Observer, The Daily Mail, and The Daily Express
Unlink the second instance of Lady Houston (duplicate link)
"'Forgive my asking, but you know everything'" Use double quotes instead of single quotes
"a 'wrong 'un.'" Use double quotes instead of single quotes
"37.5 feet (11.4 m) long" Use the adj card here
Move last paragraph into next section.
Death
Merge first two paragraphs.
Unlink Winston Churchill, Arnold (duplicate links)
Writings
Move hatnote to the top of the section
Merge last two paragraphs of "Writings"
"his brother Professor A. W. Lawrence" -> "His brother Arnold" and unlink
Unlink Aqaba, Winston Churchill, Robert Graves, E. M. Forster, Jeremy Wilson, George Bernard Shaw', Augustus John, D. G. Hogarth (duplicate links)
Sexuality
Unlink Charlotte Shaw, John E. Mack (duplicate links)
Adlington controversy
"Lawrence of Arabia: A biographical enquiry" -> " Lawrence of Arabia: A Biographical Enquiry"
"Aldington alleges" -> "Aldington alleged"
Awards and commemorations
"and awarded the Croix de guerre (France)" Delete "awarded"
"Lawrence appears on the album cover of Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band by The Beatles" Move into the Popular culture section
Unlink Arab Revolt, Eric Kennington, Polstead Road (duplicate links)
Sources
Anderson, Armitage, Brown, Carchidi, Ciampaglia, Richard Graves, Hoffman, Hullsman, Hyde, James, M. R. Lawrence, 2003 version of Lawrence, Leclerc, Leigh, Marriott, Meulenjizer, Meyer, Mousa, Norman, Nutting, Ocampo, Paris, Rosen, Sarindar, Sattin, Simpson, Stewart, Storrs and Thomas are not used. Create a "Further reading" section and move them all there.
All good. I made some minor changes to the References. Some further work would be required to clean the sources and image licences up if you wanted to take it to FAC.
Hawkeye7(discuss)19:02, 10 November 2022 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"300 miles (480 km)" Use adj=on to convert to adjectival form
"he was invested as a Companion of the Order of the Bath and promoted to Major". Do not capitalise "major" here. Could add your link and date of the Gazette (which appears later)
"Colonel Pierce Charles Joyce" -> "Lieutenant Colonel Pierce Charles Joyce"
"10th Australian Light Horse Brigade led by Major A. C. N. "Harry" Olden" Major issue: there was no 10th Light Brigade. Olden commanded the
10th Light Horse Regiment. And link to that article.
"General Gourand" -> General Henri Gouraud
Unlink Aqaba, Damascus, t Sykes-Picot Agreement (duplicate links)
Post-war years
Merge the paragraph beginning with "Lawrence worked with Thomas" into the previous paragraph.
Merge the paragraph beginning with "He campaigned" into the previous paragraph.
Link The Times, The Observer, The Daily Mail, and The Daily Express
Unlink the second instance of Lady Houston (duplicate link)
"'Forgive my asking, but you know everything'" Use double quotes instead of single quotes
"a 'wrong 'un.'" Use double quotes instead of single quotes
"37.5 feet (11.4 m) long" Use the adj card here
Move last paragraph into next section.
Death
Merge first two paragraphs.
Unlink Winston Churchill, Arnold (duplicate links)
Writings
Move hatnote to the top of the section
Merge last two paragraphs of "Writings"
"his brother Professor A. W. Lawrence" -> "His brother Arnold" and unlink
Unlink Aqaba, Winston Churchill, Robert Graves, E. M. Forster, Jeremy Wilson, George Bernard Shaw', Augustus John, D. G. Hogarth (duplicate links)
Sexuality
Unlink Charlotte Shaw, John E. Mack (duplicate links)
Adlington controversy
"Lawrence of Arabia: A biographical enquiry" -> " Lawrence of Arabia: A Biographical Enquiry"
"Aldington alleges" -> "Aldington alleged"
Awards and commemorations
"and awarded the Croix de guerre (France)" Delete "awarded"
"Lawrence appears on the album cover of Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band by The Beatles" Move into the Popular culture section
Unlink Arab Revolt, Eric Kennington, Polstead Road (duplicate links)
Sources
Anderson, Armitage, Brown, Carchidi, Ciampaglia, Richard Graves, Hoffman, Hullsman, Hyde, James, M. R. Lawrence, 2003 version of Lawrence, Leclerc, Leigh, Marriott, Meulenjizer, Meyer, Mousa, Norman, Nutting, Ocampo, Paris, Rosen, Sarindar, Sattin, Simpson, Stewart, Storrs and Thomas are not used. Create a "Further reading" section and move them all there.
All good. I made some minor changes to the References. Some further work would be required to clean the sources and image licences up if you wanted to take it to FAC.
Hawkeye7(discuss)19:02, 10 November 2022 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.