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Reviewer: Calvin999 ( talk · contribs) 22:47, 2 August 2012 (UTC) reply

• There are three dab links.  Done

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• You say "Sweet Love" quite a lot. Change some of them to "It" or the "The song".  Done
• "Musically, "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad that displays elements of electronic music. Lyrically, it revolves around Brown asking his lover to get naked so they can have sexual intercourse." → "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad which incorporates elements of electronic music. The lyrics of the song revolve around Brown asking his lover to take off her clothes so that they can have sex.  Done
• "In the US," → In the United States,  Done
• Write "chart" after Hot 100.  Done
• → was co-directed  Done
• "It features scenes of Brown and his love interest making love," → It displays intimate scenes of Brown and his lover partaking in sexual activity,  Done
• "The video garnered positive reception from critics for its sexual theme." → Critics were complimentary of the video's sexual themes and presentation.  Done

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• → "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad that displays elements of electronic music; it lasts for a duration of three minutes and 19 seconds long. (You will have adjust footnotes accordingly.  Done
• "so they can make sweet love." → Is this your own words?  Fixed

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• You don't need three subsections, you don't need subsections are all really. The paragraphs aren't long enough for it.  Done
• → was co-directed  Done

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On hold for 7 days. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:15, 6 August 2012 (UTC) reply

Passing :) Aaron • ^{You Da One} 23:04, 7 August 2012 (UTC) reply

Thanks! Oz ^talk 23:18, 7 August 2012 (UTC) reply