You need to get a third party to check the copy. In the second sentence alone, there are glaring mistakes: "Originally due for released on 9 November 2010 but was pushed back to 7 December 2010. It is the second album that Bedingfield has released exclusively in the Canada and the United States, following in the footsteps of Pocketful of Sunshine." There are also punctuation errors throughout.
Overall: The prose requires some looking into for grammatical and punctuation errors. I suggest a third-eye have a look at this. Please drop me a quick note on my talk page when this has been completed. – SMasters (
talk) 09:42, 17 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Now that the writing has been fixed, I am confident that the article meets all the requirements for a GA and am happy to pass it. – SMasters (
talk) 13:25, 29 March 2011 (UTC)reply
You need to get a third party to check the copy. In the second sentence alone, there are glaring mistakes: "Originally due for released on 9 November 2010 but was pushed back to 7 December 2010. It is the second album that Bedingfield has released exclusively in the Canada and the United States, following in the footsteps of Pocketful of Sunshine." There are also punctuation errors throughout.
Overall: The prose requires some looking into for grammatical and punctuation errors. I suggest a third-eye have a look at this. Please drop me a quick note on my talk page when this has been completed. – SMasters (
talk) 09:42, 17 March 2011 (UTC)reply
Now that the writing has been fixed, I am confident that the article meets all the requirements for a GA and am happy to pass it. – SMasters (
talk) 13:25, 29 March 2011 (UTC)reply