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Your request for feedback at Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 May 12 has been replied to. Crisco 1492 ( talk) 10:25, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
":*I have to say my biggest concern is the tone of the article. It does not seem to encyclopedic. For example, "A sheet of flame" seems more journalistic. Also, you may want to take another look at the guide for reliable sources. I'm not sure if they are all reliable. Other than that, it looks pretty good. Beautiful categories. Crisco 1492 ( talk) 10:21, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
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Your request for feedback at Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 May 12 has been replied to. Crisco 1492 ( talk) 10:25, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
":*I have to say my biggest concern is the tone of the article. It does not seem to encyclopedic. For example, "A sheet of flame" seems more journalistic. Also, you may want to take another look at the guide for reliable sources. I'm not sure if they are all reliable. Other than that, it looks pretty good. Beautiful categories. Crisco 1492 ( talk) 10:21, 12 May 2011 (UTC)