I see room for improvement in this article. I will review it since it is close to
WP:GA standards.--
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I see the change. I have to reread the rest of the article to see if this is a proper summary.--
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I don't think so. What might be the problem? --
Jprg1966(talk) 15:07, 13 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I think it was a brain freeze. I may have been thinking that it was a fall sport or something.--
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"breaking a record previously held by Mark Prior, " - record for latest signing or highest dollar amount?--
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Citation needed for "1.64 ERA while striking out 27 and walking six in 22 innings."--
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highest attendance in the 135-year history of baseball in Syracuse? How high?--
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Were there any high profile doctors involved in his surgery and the decision to have a hard inning limit?--
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You should note that this source is from before his surgery. Does he still have the same velocity on all his pitches? Does he still use them the same way?--
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If you look at what is now reference 64, you'll see all of Strasburg's pitches as tracked by
PITCHf/x. His velocity is current through the 2012 season. --
Jprg1966(talk) 21:09, 19 November 2012 (UTC)reply
His pitch repertoire and speeds have not changed in the last two years. In both the pre-surgery and PITCHf/x sources, you'll see mention of his four-seam, two-seam, breaking ball, and change, with the appropriate speeds. --
Jprg1966(talk) 16:35, 5 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Tagged. Never done that before, so let me know if it is correct. --
Jprg1966(talk) 19:01, 5 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I am putting this article on hold. Please address the concerns above by responding after each line. I will strike issues as I feel that they have been resolved.--
TonyTheTiger (
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I have advised the nominator that unless progress is resumed this article will be failed.--
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The nominator has
requested help. I will hold off at least until the weekend before reevaluating this.--00:11, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
The only remaining issue is the unexplained 2 and 1/3 inning appearance. I just reminded the nominator.--
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Went ahead and addressed that. Figured it was just simple minor league inning limits, but it was a rain delay instead.
Wizardman 04:02, 25 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I am now passing this. Thanks for the hard work and patience with this review.--
TonyTheTiger (
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And thank you for your patience and diligence. Good work, all. --
Jprg1966(talk) 17:03, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I see room for improvement in this article. I will review it since it is close to
WP:GA standards.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 15:20, 11 November 2012 (UTC)reply
I see the change. I have to reread the rest of the article to see if this is a proper summary.--
TonyTheTiger (
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I don't think so. What might be the problem? --
Jprg1966(talk) 15:07, 13 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I think it was a brain freeze. I may have been thinking that it was a fall sport or something.--
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WP:FOUR) 17:12, 13 December 2012 (UTC)reply
"breaking a record previously held by Mark Prior, " - record for latest signing or highest dollar amount?--
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WP:FOUR) 19:37, 17 November 2012 (UTC)reply
Citation needed for "1.64 ERA while striking out 27 and walking six in 22 innings."--
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WP:FOUR) 20:19, 17 November 2012 (UTC)reply
highest attendance in the 135-year history of baseball in Syracuse? How high?--
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WP:FOUR) 20:19, 17 November 2012 (UTC)reply
Were there any high profile doctors involved in his surgery and the decision to have a hard inning limit?--
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WP:FOUR) 00:17, 19 November 2012 (UTC)reply
You should note that this source is from before his surgery. Does he still have the same velocity on all his pitches? Does he still use them the same way?--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 00:25, 19 November 2012 (UTC)reply
If you look at what is now reference 64, you'll see all of Strasburg's pitches as tracked by
PITCHf/x. His velocity is current through the 2012 season. --
Jprg1966(talk) 21:09, 19 November 2012 (UTC)reply
His pitch repertoire and speeds have not changed in the last two years. In both the pre-surgery and PITCHf/x sources, you'll see mention of his four-seam, two-seam, breaking ball, and change, with the appropriate speeds. --
Jprg1966(talk) 16:35, 5 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Tagged. Never done that before, so let me know if it is correct. --
Jprg1966(talk) 19:01, 5 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I am putting this article on hold. Please address the concerns above by responding after each line. I will strike issues as I feel that they have been resolved.--
TonyTheTiger (
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I have advised the nominator that unless progress is resumed this article will be failed.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 00:53, 30 November 2012 (UTC)reply
The nominator has
requested help. I will hold off at least until the weekend before reevaluating this.--00:11, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
The only remaining issue is the unexplained 2 and 1/3 inning appearance. I just reminded the nominator.--
TonyTheTiger (
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Went ahead and addressed that. Figured it was just simple minor league inning limits, but it was a rain delay instead.
Wizardman 04:02, 25 December 2012 (UTC)reply
I am now passing this. Thanks for the hard work and patience with this review.--
TonyTheTiger (
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And thank you for your patience and diligence. Good work, all. --
Jprg1966(talk) 17:03, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply